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Kittens Play


Having fun and proud of it.

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muezza56
 
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i love this, well written with great and simple imagery it's one of my favourite subject matters-cats. this 575 captures the naughty kittens perfectly with a cute and related picture selection. reminds me a little of a nursery rhyme ' you naughty little kittens, you have lost your mittens...' in the sense that given the opportunity that these furry little cute monsters can cause mayhem!


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2013



reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
    They can cause mayhem. I have their next little miss ready for another poem. Thank you for the kind review.
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Such a wonderful piece. I love the flow and vision you make the reader create in their minds. I always have a problem trying to figure out how to do a short 5-7-5. Oh, well Barbara, one day I'll learn to write just like you. Thank you.


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2013



reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
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mystery poet
 
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This little guy got into some mischief that he
won't get out of. When they want to play
it's a hay day for sure. Love this pic, so
adorable. I love my cat!!! This is such fun
and a pleasure to read...


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2013



reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.

reply by mystery poet on 29-Jan-2013
    It's a pleasure!!!
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Gianinas
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Funny, and uplifting. I was down on my luck and after I read about your playful kittens, my spirits lifted a bit. Good Luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013



reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
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Now I remember why I don't have cats:) An everyday thing that you captured in this 5/7/5, in a charming and whimsical way. Nice write--Ted


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013



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    Thank you for the kind review.
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Hi Barbara,

This is a delightful 5/7/5 poem. I don't know why kittens love to play with toilet tissue but they do. I love the picture you chose, your count is spot on and I love the theme. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013



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    Thank you for the kind review.
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A short and sweet 575 about the naughty kittens - always up to something mischievous. Only thing is the kittens don't know what they are doing and neither do we know what they were thinking.
To win this guessing game, best to lock everything playful out of their reach, toilet rolls being one of them, LOL. Good write with humor no doubt.

Cheers, Ritchiesszzky.


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013



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    Thank you for the kind review.

reply by 9999pool on 28-Jan-2013
    Welcome Barbara. The pleasure is all mine. Cheers, Ritchie.

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fictionwriter
 
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Those darn cats can lay waste to so many things. I quite enjoyed this, and have had that same sort of mess too. It's hard to use that toilet paper when you have to pick up the shreds. Well done.


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013



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    Thank you for the kind review.
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Cats and toddlers, I tell ya! :) I don't quite understand the love of playing with the toilet paper, but it must be a big deal. I enjoyed reading your poem and I like how you showed their thought process throughout- getting excited to see the paper and then bummed when you put it away. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 28-Jan-2013



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    Thank you for the kind review.
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mtnspirit
 
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Hi barbara,

Cute poem and from the looks of it mom had better put the toilet paper up. It makes you wonder what their thinking when they get into mischief like this. Best wishes in this contest.


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2013



reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
    I think they are just looking for fun. I appreciate your review.
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