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New life


A gentle thought about a good report

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Carolyn this is so beautiful, me chick with the diamonds in her hair. I can only imagine the relief you must have felt after receiving some good news for a change. Your description is so apt it brought tear to my own eyes - you naughty, you.
Well done
You write with the hands of an angel
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser

Ps - I cannot find your poem - Martini and what is the name of your featured poem?


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
    New life was actually inspired by my sisters news, and dedicated to all cancer survivors. So far I have escaped the 'non respecter of person' C word. I'm not sure which poem you mean? My portfolio will show all post. Have a great day (or probably evening there in SA) :-) Carolyn
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this is such a simple poem put in simple words. you don't always have to find words of difficulty. it works as it is.
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
    And thank you Rebekka for the comments. You are appreciated, Carolyn
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The last three lines say it all. Great format and and pacing in this thankful poem. Excellent word choice with the assonance of grate(ful) and stain.


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Thanks, as usual for your nice review. Carolyn
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What an uplifting message and reminder of hope! I have been a part of a moment like this with a loved one, and also, unfortunately, of one not like this subsequently. I can truly appreciate this and think it a lovely thing that you thought to write about it. I love the vertical structure of the write. Well suited to represent the tears of joy.

Thank you for sharing this.

:) Lena


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Thank you Lena for such a wonderful review. Maybe one day our survivor list will be longer than our victims list. I'm glad you liked the poem. Carolyn

reply by Lena Borghi on 19-Feb-2013
    :)
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Your artwork and poem ring true for me. I am a survivor 2 times over. Two different types of cancer --once in 1963 and the other type in 1997. I am very blessed, living largely and loving to write. Thanks for posting and reminding me to be grateful, enjoy each day and say thanks to Him each day.


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



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    Thank you for sharing your story. Please know that you are loved, Carolyn
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What a sweet write, Carolyn. It seems that if you're a "survivor" you're far more conscious or your own mortality than most people, AND far more grateful for life. Blessings for this lovely piece!
:)Sharyn


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



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    Sharyn, thank you for the insightful comments. You are appreciated, Carolyn
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Wet spots
on clothing
leave no stain


Very good Notes and certainly has more to say than ever thought. I wonder where it all goes to, eh? So wonderful.


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    I'm glad you liked it. Prayerfully, day our list of survivors will exceed the list of victims. Thanks, Carolyn

reply by Gungalo on 19-Feb-2013
    Smile girl.
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this is very well writtne notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this poem about survivors crying happy tears. i love the picture. it was perfect....


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Thanks for your insightful review. You are appreciated. Carolyn
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Hello my friend this is very well written a great tribute to those survivors in the world today well done my friend sorry still playing catch up well done on this write regards Jill


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Thank you Jill,for the wonderful comments. Don't worry I am behind too. Hope you are feeling well. Carolyn
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New life indeed it wound be nice if one can have a new life
after the old one runs out, that's a loveluy expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, lakeport.


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    I appreciate your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Carolyn

reply by lakeport on 19-Feb-2013
    your welcome Carolyn,Hugs!lakeport.
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