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A gentle thought about a good report

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Hi Carolyn, this is a strong work, especially for survivors.
Well penned and powerful for those who stop to ponder between the lines as well.
Great writing my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    You are welcome, hope you are doing well. Have a great day Maureen, :-) Carolyn
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jmdg1954
 
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Hey hey... Three cheers to all survivors! My wife is in her twelfth year as a breast cancer survivor. Thank you God!!
A nice poem for one of my first readings of the day.
Thank you Carolyn... John


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Wonderful news! I am glad you started your day with Thanks to God, and John, something tells me that's a sweet, usual morning for you. Carolyn
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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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A gentle filial approach feeling and expression at a good family report, modestly spoken, clearly voiced, flow of thoughts is natural as the images, while there is dearth of visual projection but it was an easy read.


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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Thank you for reviewing the poem and your comments. I appreciate the time you take to read, Best always, Carolyn
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A very sweet and gentle poem, relating to a good report. Few words tell a big story and a sad one at that. Words flow well and tell a complete message.


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Thank you for the insightful comments. Best always, Carolyn
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Can you hear the bell ringing? Because I know many of us survivors want to reach for it and ring it. Many of us have come a long way to get through our treatments of whatever was ailing us for years. It is with many tears that we have come to this point in our lives that we can now say that it is now our time to live without fear. Your poem and picture will bring more tears of joy for many as they read your inciteful words. Thank you.


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Bless your heart. I am so happy for you and your current health. Thank you for sharing your story. I'm glad you liked the poem and the picture. Carolyn
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c_lucas
 
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In todays world it is possible to conquer disease which would have killed a decade ago. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    You are so right, we are blessed to be born in this era. I appreciate you good review. Best always, Carolyn

reply by c_lucas on 19-Feb-2013
    You're welcome, Carolyn. Charlie
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This is excellent starting with the words on the picture and continuing down the page to the final line. You say so much using only a few words. Those words definitely describe the emotions of a survivor who battles and wins. Great job!

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2013



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    Good Morning and thank you for the comments. If we each wrote a list of all the survivors in our life, for the first time in decades, it might possibly be longer than the victims. Wouldn't that be wonderful. Have a great day. Carolyn

reply by kentuckywoman53 on 19-Feb-2013
    Your welcome Carolyn
    Hope you don't mind that I posted a message on your profile page. Have a great day!!

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2013
    I replied on my profile page. Hehehe!!!
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