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A man finds a bag full of eternal questions.

  21 total reviews 
Comment by
Paradox Tremors
 
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Wow, love the story. Different and Unusual. Very well thought out and written. Mr. Murphy was fortune to run into and have Ms. Earhart as his sponsor. I would love to read more with Earhart and Murphy teaming up in other stories.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016



reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    Sorry it took so long to answer. Very glad you enjoyed the story. I really enjoyed writing it. Good luck in your own
    writing efforts.

reply by Paradox Tremors on 16-Jul-2016
    Thank-you.


reply by Anonymous Member on 19-Jul-2016
    Thank-you.

Comment by
Rebecca Wang
 
 
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I found this really interesting and well-written. Great speech and use of dialogue. Your writing ability is really extravagant, and I think you should write more. Thanks for this great read!


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2015



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
    Thank you for your kind comments...and thank you for reading something that has been lying around for a while. Working on two things right now in an attempt to get more writing produced. Good luck in your own efforts.
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kwyattman
 
 
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Excellent story. Very imaginative. I saw what was happening with the tornado fairly early on but you built it up well and it was very effective. Such a unique idea and your writing was very well done.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
    Thank you for the kind words and stars. Glad you enjoyed the story. I apologize if I did not send a reply earlier...I thought I had. Good luck in your own wring.
Comment by
judy.gordon
 
 
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This is a very extraordinary and creative way to use a garbage bag to bring forth people from the past that vanished. This could potentially develop into a novel in which you explore this idea further.









 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014



reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
    Thank you for the kind words and the stars. Makes me feel good people are still reading my efforts after the contest is long finished. Good luck in your own writing.
Comment by
Aiona
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  Rank:  11 (+1)
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LOL! This is so bizarre, but I loved reading it. One typo: "How hold was, or is, Miss Dare ?" I think you meant "How old was, or is, Miss Dare?" Right?


 Comment Written 28-Dec-2013



reply by the author on 28-Dec-2013
    Glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for the rating and the correction.
Comment by
jmdg1954
 
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I found this fantasy story quite intriguing with many historical references. Making Amelia the main historical charector was well thought out. I like how you introduced her into the story.
Congrats on winning the contest howard11.
John


 Comment Written 11-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
    Glad you enjoyed the story. As a history nut, the story was fun to write. Good luck in your writing.
Comment by
Econ Teacher
 
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I read this story when you first submitted. I liked it then and I liked it now. I was too busy to review it then. Now that it's won the contest, I just wanted to stop by and say, "Congratulations!"


 Comment Written 11-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
    Appreciate such kind comments from a fan. Thank you for the stars.
Comment by
Joannforsberg
 
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I so enjoyed reading this piece. I can see why you won the trash bag contest. Such creativity that keeps the reader seeking more. Love the whole: "Oh yea. Gruff individual with ugly scar across throat. Complained about dry cement in his eyes and ears. For I am a Michigan girl and he is buried in cement somewhere here by Detroit. Truly a story talked about here for years.

Well, well, well done. One of my all-time favorite stories here at fan story.
P.S. I would give a six, but I am already out for the week. Been reviewing for hours now.
Blessings, JO


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
    Thank you for liking my work. Double thank you for noting the Hoffa line. I thought it was cute. Good luck in your own writing.
Comment by
Adri7enne
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Great story! I love the way it's understated. No big melodramatic hand wringing. Just, plain good story telling with very interesting characters and good story line. You had me wanting to look up all the names you mentioned. Some of them are real, but one part reminds me of a story line on Dexter - the oil drum bit.
A well earned win, howard11. Fascinating stuff. Six worthy. I'm sure you understand if I save it for someone who might need encouragement. LOL! Your win is all the encouragement you need with this one. Congrats!!!


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
    Thank you for your enthusiasm and the rating. By the way, they are all real except Harold himself. Agatha Christie did disappear for about a week once. Good luck in your own writing.
Comment by
Child of the King
 
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Congrats! I can see why this is a winner. So entertaining and fun to read. What an imaginative story to create like you did with such skill. Kudos


 Comment Written 10-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
    Appreciate the kind words and, of course, the rating. Good luck in your own writing.
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