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Maureen's Pen
 
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Hi Robyn,
A lovely poem for your friends and as always well penned.It's nice to see you back my friend and posting again.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Maureen


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
    Thanks, Maureen! I've missed you and sincerely hope you are well. Take care --

reply by Maureen's Pen on 14-Mar-2013
    I'm doing well my friend so glad your back:D
    x
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jmdg1954
 
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Nicely written. In pink I have to assume it's a girl? The rhyme was spot on and the cadence for me helped to make this an soft enjoyable read.
Wishing your friends all the best,
John

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
    Thanks so much for your thoughtful and kind comments. Have a super day!
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purrfect tale
 
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Ahhhh! This is so sweet. Glad I was 'visiting' here today and had the chance to read it. That first stanza just set the tone and drug me into the poetic story. I'd give you a six, but standard members don't get any.

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
    So good to hear from you!! Thanks for your kind comments. Hugs --
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sgalletti
 
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I cannot tell you how happy I am to see you back and posting. I have so missed you (worried about you) and tried to contact you several times. The six is not only because I find your words to be beautiful with excellent meter and rhymes but because I am simply elated to find this PM in my box this morning. For me, there are certain lines that would read smoother with just a little tweaking, like the second line of stanza two, eliminate "And," and last line would read smoother as: "You carry secrets deep within" although that might change the meaning for you...I'm sure your friends will love this poem. Hugs, Sue


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
    I should have known yours would be the first review I might receive. What a blessing and encourager you have been, and are! I'm sorry that I haven't responded. I have been in a mire of sorts and am struggling to find my way back out.

    It's hard to write or call to say I'm okay -- when I'm truly not. As Spring approaches, I expect much of the weariness and depression to lift.

    Thanks for all you do and all you are. Consider yourself loved!

reply by sgalletti on 14-Mar-2013
    I know you are getting lots of support from your family, but please know you can always call and say "Help, I need to talk." Upi aremuch loved yourself, my friend! Take it easy. Be gentle on yourself. Hugs, Sue!
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