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When The Rain Bows Down


It was an art of beauty.

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Quillian
 
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I think your 5-7-5 succeeded in it's imagery. It is difficult to make a good poem within this structure, but you managed nicely. I was able to see your colored sky. Nice job...


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2013
    Wow. Thank you. I suddenly felt confidence in myself. May God bless you.
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I am not a huge fan of haikus but I believe in if you get enough credit on this sight by reading others then I think others should read you. I like this haiku, but I am not a fan of haikus at all lol good luck with your writing my young friend! I'm young like you lol


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2013
    Oh, thank you. Good luck to you, too. May God bless you.
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That's a beautiful piece! Well written and like the play on word with rainbows. Welcome to fanstory and good luck in contest:)beth fairy77.


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2013


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    Thank you. *laughs* May God bless you all.

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013
    Thank you. *laughs* May God bless you all.
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Titanx9
 
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This is an excellent portrayal of the relationship between rain, rainbows and ourselves. The Great Creator has provided a beautiful world for our enjoyment, on so many levels, but it's the beauty and the awesomeness of the rainbow that's universal.


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2013
    Yes, it is. Everything God created ia beautiful
    All we need to do is to find the beauty in those creations. May God bless you all.
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CrystieCookie999
 
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This is a nice little haiku. I gave it 5 stars because it seems unusual to take the word "rainbows" and split it up into "rain bows" for an entirely different meaning.


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013


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    Thank you. May God bless you all.
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adewpearl
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the personification of the rain
good assonance of long A sounds in rain/painting/gaze
good consonance of hard C sounds in color/sky :-) Brooke


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013


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    woohhh.. such a nice review. Thank you. May God bless you all. I think I should work on becoming a reviewer next
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bowing down I gaze upon the rain awaiting the clouds to disappear clearing the way for a beautiful colourful write I enjoyed the shower


 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013


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    You write better than me. *laughs*
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so nice and i can see this rainbow of many colors in a colorful shy thankyou for sharing it was a preasure to read your woork


 Comment Written 26-May-2013


reply by the author on 26-May-2013
    Thank you, donette1914. I'm so glad that you had appreciated my work.
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THE NICE PAINTING OF COLORS IN THE SKY MUST BE THE STORM WARNING LIKE THE OLD SAYING GOES RED SKY IN THE MORNING SAILOR TAKE WORNING


 Comment Written 26-May-2013


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    I see. Actually, I don't know that. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. ^^
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