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Jerry Jing-Jang the Lawman


JJJ is deputy for a day

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This is a neat story in a poem. The cowboy is a great character, and a great legend. The image compliments the western scene.


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016



reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
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This is a terrific story in rhyme. You really set the western mood and this reader had many clear images floating through her mind as she read. Lou


 Comment Written 01-Jul-2013



reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. He's a fun character. Thanks for your wonderful review.
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Morning found Rusty on the trail
With Jerry Jing-Jang waiting to toss him in jail.
Rusty the rustler was caught unaware,
Likewise the cowboy, for the sheriff was there.
He said "well done, thanks to Jerry Jing-Jang
I'll now take the prisoner and Rusty will hang."

Even for the not so happy ending, or who knows.., the poem's melodic rhythm and captivating story were keeping me interested from beginning to end.

Just a little disappointed at the end, (a job well done is better than an effort thwarted, in my opinion-Hollywood would never go for this..).


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
    Thanks for the six! I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. He's going to be riding for a while yet, so I can't wrap it up too neatly. I have to leave an opening for future adventures. Some of his old ones are available in my portfolio, if you're interested. Thanks again for the six.
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'Jerry Jing-Jang, The Lawman.' "A Cowboy is what I'm meant to be." Very good Western poem you wrote here. I also thought your work was well formulated.


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang.

reply by chasennov on 27-Jun-2013
    You're always welcome.
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Steve Pantazis
 
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This was a fun romp through the wild west of your imagination. I like the play on words and the interplay of characters as you weave your stanzas in a very easy rhythm. Well done of a fine piece of work!


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.
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Hello there Cindy
This is very well written and has superb visuals as well. I was a cowboy 50 years ago, and it was such a lovely life. Your poem reminds me of days gone by
Bear


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. I'm sure it would be wonderful to be a cowboy. Thanks for your wonderful review.
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This poem has humorous and consistent a-a, b-b,c-c rhyming scheme that honors the genre of the ranch and country life. The realization of what one is meant to do is a great conclusion to the poem. :0 GracieAnn


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    I'm glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.
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What a rustic, frolicking tale of the old west, penned in sing-song fashion with a thriving, jiving, bouncy beat.

This tale of the cowardly sheriff, Rusty the rustler, and our hero of the day, old Jerry Jing-Jang himself, was very well done and so well executed. It reads almost like a fabled song of the old west, sung long ago in taverns.

Commendable achievement, and a poem well done!


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    What a wonderful review! I'm glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang so much. He's one of my favorite characters to write. There are more of his adventures in my portfolio, if you're interested. Thanks again for a wonderful review.
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What a smooth- flowing story line. After all that and ok Rusty is free. This one speaks to the nature of our justice system. I wish you luck and thank you for sharing your story with us
K


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
    If JJJ caught Rusty, what would he do then? Got to keep him around for another adventure. LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the wonderful review.
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GregoryCody
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Haha what a clever poem. This is witty and very well written. You paint the character well. Its like a story within a poem. Fantastic piece and seriously it was fun to read.


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
    I'm glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.
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