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Jerry Jing-Jang the Lawman


JJJ is deputy for a day

  39 total reviews 
Comment by
Curt Winslow
 
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This is a very cool poem, one of the neatest I have read on here. It took me back to when me and my dad watched Bonanza and other westerns on Saturday mornings. great job!


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. This is one of the coolest reviews I've had. Thanks.
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Nuad1
 
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I never read a western poem before; good experience today reading yours. I liked its rhythm; how the story naturally unfolded to the realization of "me being me". Powerful thought.


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.
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Selina Stambi
 
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There was a strong voice (with a western twang!) in this write.

Almost sing-song, it narrates beautifully a cowboy country and western sort of tale.

Jerry Jing-Jang ... what a great name! :)

All the best in the contest. This is a worthy candidate!


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review and the good wishes for the contest.
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bossladyone
 
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I like this poem. It is well written and flows nicly. It reads like a song and I like that a lot. The picture and color scheme add to the imapact of the poem, but I think it is wonderful any way. Thank you for sharing


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for the great review.
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Roxanna Andrews
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This is very clever. I like it very much, great rhyme and meter, easy to read and a fun story besides. I wish you well in the contest. Rox


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review.
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ravenblack
 
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Good job telling a story in verse, but just how did you come up with the name Jerry Jing hang? A spaghetti western this ain't. No hanging w/out a trial ( hell, they'd sting up anybody in the old west).


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    Jerry Jing-Jang (aka Gerry Warren)is my dad. He used to tell stories of his cowboy days when we were kids. They were fictional, of course, but when I was six I totally believed him. Thanks for the great review.
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Phyllis Stewart
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Good story, with a hero no less. Good rhyme tho the meter is off a bit in places. Has a moral as well as being entertaining. Moral is "YOU CAN'T TRUST GOVERNMENT!" That's what I choose to see, because they ARE so very corrupt.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    Glad you enjoyed the story. The sheriff is an idiot. I can't hang Rusty, because what would JJJ do without him?
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JM daSilva
 
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A cowboy with a sense of justice who believes in judges, juries and lawyers. This sheriff won't be reelected unless people are stupid. Nice poem. Made me think of a cowboy we have here, Gwinterwin. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    That sheriff has to be a bit of an idiot. Otherwise he'd catch Rusty, Rusty would hang, and I'd have no story. Glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang.

reply by JM daSilva on 24-Jun-2013
    Yeah. There are different ways to catch someone strong. lol.
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Black_Oxygen
 
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Well Done ~ Cindy

This poetry is a fun read. It held my interest from
start to finish. The reader-friendly language adds
to the adventure and enjoyment. The attached photo
is a befitting accent that enhances the scene. Thank
You for your creation.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. Thanks for the great review.
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Sam Mendonca
 
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The only words I can say about your poem is "Excellent."

You did an excellent writing using a poem to tell a very
good and exciting story.


Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2013



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
    Thanks for the six! I'm so glad you enjoyed Jerry Jing-Jang. He's one of my favorite characters to write. There are more of his adventures in my portfolio, if you're interested. Don't feel you have to review the old stuff for one point. Thanks again for the six, and the great review. Have a wonderful weekend.
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