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A Change of Pace


My forays into free verse

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Semper Fi
 
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"spooled within the silky lace of a sex-spun net" I love it. You are not going down easy...are you. LOL I find that free verse allows me the freedom of not searching for rhymes instead of keeping my train of thought in my writing. I love this poem. "Your choking silence will be just dessert." The web is nice metaphor. Bob


 Comment Written 24-Jul-2005


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Wendyanne
 
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This is an interesting free-verse poem. You seem to be conveying a sense of bitterness towards someone and this is strongly felt. I like the last line. Sweet revenge.


 Comment Written 24-Jul-2005


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Free verse, perhaps - but look at the way you have neatly structured it. Obviously a master at work, whatever the circumstances. Another fine poem and such a joy to read.


 Comment Written 24-Jul-2005


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Jewell McChesney
My mouth will speak words of wisdom
my heart's utterance gives understanding
 
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Ooooh, this is a very creative free verse causing this wild imagination
to go into a frenzy.
The imagry created with this one is perfect,
The strong emotion of regret is evident,
and the wisdom of the writer once again shines bright!

LOVE IT!

always~
Jewell


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2005


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Louanne
 
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The Last Word
This is great. Sorry, I hate to smile or
laugh, but this struck me as funny -
What a follow-up to her visit. I am loving
your images and can't imagine how
you come up with these things.
Please forgive me, you and the person
you speak to, (just in case she is a friend
of mine who is hiding her relationship with
you from me!) if I am offending in any way.
: ) Hugs! And get some air, OK?


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2005


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Mzhurst
 
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Wow, Who pulled your chain Lol
Seriously a very powerful use of free verse to express an apparent anger towards someone.
WHO??????????????
Tell
write on


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2005


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Dawn of Tomorrow
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I gotta tell you darling that is probably one of the most powerful free verse pieces I have ever read. There is a strong force of conviction behind those well placed thoughts. I'm impressed. Great read, sugar. Hugs, JL


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2005


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How delicious, free verse from you! As usual, your talent allow the leap with deft use of language and excellent images. Bravo, friend. You never fail to touch the heart. Zen


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2005


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Whatever orientation, this free verse is outstanding in both quality of message and presentation. Isn't it interesting what happens when the writing muse goes where it wants to go? :-)


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2005


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The End Game
Oh I relate! Another great free verse. I like the fact that you are reaching beyond your comfort zone. The result of experimenting this way is very profound. I can feel the emotional tug on creative and technical levels.
Your intelligence shines here!
Nice one!
Weaver.


 Comment Written 23-Jul-2005


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