"spooled within the silky lace of a sex-spun net" I love it. You are not going down easy...are you. LOL I find that free verse allows me the freedom of not searching for rhymes instead of keeping my train of thought in my writing. I love this poem. "Your choking silence will be just dessert." The web is nice metaphor. Bob
Ooooh, this is a very creative free verse causing this wild imagination
to go into a frenzy.
The imagry created with this one is perfect,
The strong emotion of regret is evident,
and the wisdom of the writer once again shines bright!
This is great. Sorry, I hate to smile or
laugh, but this struck me as funny -
What a follow-up to her visit. I am loving
your images and can't imagine how
you come up with these things.
Please forgive me, you and the person
you speak to, (just in case she is a friend
of mine who is hiding her relationship with
you from me!) if I am offending in any way.
: ) Hugs! And get some air, OK?
I gotta tell you darling that is probably one of the most powerful free verse pieces I have ever read. There is a strong force of conviction behind those well placed thoughts. I'm impressed. Great read, sugar. Hugs, JL
Oh I relate! Another great free verse. I like the fact that you are reaching beyond your comfort zone. The result of experimenting this way is very profound. I can feel the emotional tug on creative and technical levels.
Your intelligence shines here!