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Destination: Hope


The Last Train Back

  61 total reviews 
Comment by
Tina Crute
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Browsing some recognized work...What a creative story in a poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it! The train trip was a great metaphor for our journey. I love the phrase ,"solutions lie within." That strong phrase contributes well to an encouraging story of hope.


 Comment Written 05-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
    Thank you

reply by Tina Crute on 28-Apr-2019
    You're welcome!:) Have a great Sunday!
    Blessings,
    Tina
Comment by
JosieL
 
 
Exceptional
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Very well written with great insight. I related to this poem step-by-step. I really like "romantic" suicide. Two words that represent so much. Thank you for a very good read.


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2018


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GeorgieBoy
 
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Exceptional
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Don't we all wish we had a fatherly conductor to give us wise advice. I loved the fact that you used all these emotions as a place on your journey. You reached the destination, Hope, but had to experience and bypass all the other emotions to reach your destination. Well done!


 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015


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pantheon
 
 
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Capturing the beauty of the place and narrating the travel experience tersely
the poem is beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014


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JPilcher
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Exceptional
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This is, without a doubt, the most brilliant piece of work I've read on FanStory EVER. I'm not kidding. This is brrrrriiiiillllliiiiaaaannnnnttttt. WOW. Your title sold me, your illustration made me want to read it only THAT MUCH more and the actual writing did not disappoint - not a single word. WOW.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
    What a sweet review, JPilcher. Thank you so much for the sixer, and for your kind words. I'm not really posting here anymore, but I check in every now and then for messages. I truly appreciate the wonderful compliments.

    David
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Drew Delaney
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Wow! this is totally awesome. I am so impressed with your poetry. I just can't imagine the work you put into this, but if you are like other great poets, they say it just comes. If I had half your talent!!


 Comment Written 31-Jul-2014


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Robin Gilmor
 
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Exceptional
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Don't know how I missed this one in my messages. I've been so busy that I have not be in the site for some time. This is a beautiful verse and I am so happy for you and all the rewards. They are certainly well deserved.
Love and hugs, Robin :)


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014



reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
    My friend, that is so appreciated. I'm just now returning, so I'm sorry for the delay in my response. Thank you for the sixer and your kind words.
Comment by
Hadria
 
 
Exceptional
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Awesome! Many, many congratulations, my friend. I've been engulfed in family matters and am just trying to catch up on what everyone has been doing. This is another one for my bookcase, and I look forward to reading it regularly. A superb piece of work. Hadria


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2014


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seken58
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I am awe-struck.
What an amazing poem which took me on a convoluted and painful journey from sadness to hope with several pit-stops on the way.
I love the idea of a journey from one emotion to another and the fact that other emotions are acknowledged in the healing process.
This is definitely one of the best poems I''ve read.
Although very worthy of a six I only have a virtual one to give.


 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
    What a very kind review, seken. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review it. I gratefully accept your sixer.
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A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review.


 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014



reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
    Thank you very much for the honor. I appreciate it!
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