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The Tripod Of Priapus


It's FRY (the rogue) DAY

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Comment by
Dawn of Tomorrow
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Always dreaming
of illusive love
 
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Oh my Lord in Heaven!! I can't even believe what you posted there. I mean that poem can certainly speak on it's own without need for such a visual. I about fainted, LOL Sure I did...I don't know how you can write such naughtiness in such perfect verse. Amazing. Methinks you are a bit too proud of that tripod though. You just wait until you are 75, we'll see how sturdy that peak is then...


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
    I'm shameless, aren't I? It's actually a sculpture of Priapus, god of fertility. :) Thanks, my friend. Believe me, I know!
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Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with tricks/pricks. Good alliteration with girds/god...twerk/tongue...to/try...Priapus/pricks...make/me...big/banana...my/mighty. Good internal rhyming. Good clear message that is filled with humor.


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
    Thank you, RR!
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I really found a lot of humor in this piece of poetry. It would make for a long modified limerick in my opinion. But then again, I really am not all to great on strict poetic forms and formats. I do know however like this piece of poetry very much. It was just so very humorous... John


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
    Thank you very much, John. Humorous is all it was supposed to be, so I'll take it! :)
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Good one, Marillion. Just don't ask me to look into the camera's eye on the tripod. The henhouse will be buzzing today.


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
    Thanks, brother. Funny!
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Rondeno
 
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You say it's silly - and, okay, the "debate" is ultimately pointless, you're just having fun - but Lord, what verbal dexterity you can command!

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
    Mike, thanks so much! In the end, it's just a writing exercise in the back and forth of riposting, so I'll take that as a compliment!
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