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For which I couldn't find a place in my novel

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justafan
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Peeking again! This is seductive in its entirety. I once again am flustered here trying to not sound like an idiot. Okay, I give up!!! Loved it!!
Again I am justafan,
Melissa


 Comment Written 15-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 15-Apr-2015
    Oh, I just realized this is a poem I wrote a year or so ago. Thanks for enjoying it. I don't know how you could sound like an idiot.
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Hi Jay.
I appreciate your taking the time to review my poem, "Fragmented Stanzas." I always like to read something written by a reviewer, so I searched your portfolio for poems. (Primarily, I consider myself a poet--like to read and write poetry.) I chose this one of yours to review which is wonderful. I enjoyed the intensity and passion.

Some favorite lines:
"The flames of our passion
Swirling us to
Our willing extinction."
as well as entire last four lines.

However, I can tell by reading your story postings, even picking a random chapter, that you are an excellent author. Best, Marilyn/BeasPeas


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
    Thank you, Marilyn, for sampling some of my poetry. Yes, I am a dyed-in-the-wool prose writer. One of my better poems is "I am a Skipper of Stones." Again, Marilyn. Thanks for showing the interest.

reply by BeasPeas on 01-Apr-2015
    I think I have read that one in the past, as my memory serves me. Will check out Skipper of Stones again. Best, Marilyn/BeasPeas
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Well, well. Good one. If my memory serves me. Usually my memory serves me vivid pictures without the dull aftermath.
Thanks for giving my memory a light bulb.


 Comment Written 13-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
    If memory serves you... that's a good one. Look again, it's a night light.
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Hi Jay,

Awesome pix to go with your poem that speaks of sensuality, yet tastefully done.

Enjoyable read.

Cheers * Keep Smilin'... Jax


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
    Thanks, Jax. If you have a chance to read "Irreligious Fly Upon My Wall" I've a hunch you'll get a kick out of it.
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No surprise--your provocative title and striking artwork caught my attention. Your vivid imagery with the "phoenixes" simile was effective and the final stanza provided an original summation with the notion of "healing". Well done! -Joan


 Comment Written 11-May-2014



reply by the author on 11-May-2014
    Well, thank you so much, Joan for your gracious review. I appreciate it.
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Sex after sex,indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed poem, very nice flow. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Lakeport....


 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
    Thank you, Lakeport. Happy you enjoyed it.

reply by lakeport on 21-Apr-2014
    your welcome,Lkaeport.
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Wow, this is free verse at its finest, in my opinion - positively sizzling. The passion of this poem practically leaps from the screen, and the expression of togetherness, in the final stanza especially, is wonderfully tender without syrupy sweetness. Beautiful!


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014



reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    I don't know what you could say to me to make me feel more worthwhile! Thank you, my friend!

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 18-Apr-2014
    Very much my pleasure. :)
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I was checking out your profile page and this title caught my eye. I read it and really enjoyed it. I just want to thank you for fanning me and for your enthusiastic review of my work. I would love it if you went back and read the five prior chapters. I write short and concise pieces. I gear my writing to the reluctant reader so it shouldn't take long. I am gong to fan you as well, since I really enjoyed this piece. Gretchen


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
    First of all, thanks! In mood for a deal? I've got three chapters in my The Trining book (Fantasy) posted. I'll read and review yours if you reciprocate. I'll have the easier job. My chapters are longer, but the current one is 2nd in the listing so you'll get $1.22 for it (little sales job!) I generally do review in some detail. In that respect, I'll still have the easier job if the other 5 chapters are like the 6th. No spag and you maintain your pov and tense well. But I reports what I finds! Hey, don't feel pressured. I'll read yours anyway, LOL.

    Thanks, Jay
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This is so good on so many levels. This speaks in an imagery that shows two as one, transformation physically, emotionally and spiritually. Then you have renewal, like the phoenix, thus a rebirth or, perhaps resurrection or a reincarnate sort of subtlety, borne of reactionary properties of several realms.
You really have me thinking here, man. Maybe I am nuts, but this is cool stuff. Great work of art. This is the kind of poetry I like!


 Comment Written 04-Apr-2014



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
    We may be battling to the end on this one, Kingsrookviii, but you were so spot on in your interpretation that I need to give you a thumbsup as well!

reply by Kingsrookviii on 04-Apr-2014
    Great poetry that you have crafted.
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A majestic stylized and colorful picture. With appropriate bright orange background.

This matches well the word choice.

Powerful, creative, and with such descriptive imagery.

Truly inspiring.

:) mel.


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014



reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
    I appreciate you so much. Don't find too many who read something after the promotion is over. You made my day!

    Jay

reply by write hand blue on 01-Apr-2014
    My pleasure...
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