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Along the Jericho Road


Murder Mystery

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Comment by
AprilShower
 
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Rating of Chapter 64 -
Akicita Moon

This story is moving along at a fast pace, Bev. It certainly keeps a person awake. This is another well written chapter. I see this one has also received a well deserved sixth star. I have to keep reading.

April


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Hi, April. It's nice to see you name on this review. I was just thinking about you the other day!

    Thanks for the great review. So glad you liked the chapter.

    :) Bev
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AprilShower
 
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Rating of Chapter 63 -
Witko Moon

This is another well written chapter, Bev. I would give you another six, but you already have six stars. I want to save some of the ones I have. I'm going to continue reading.

April


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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Thanks so much, April. I really appreciate your stopping by to read and review so kindly. :) Bev
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AprilShower
 
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Rating of Chapter 62 -
Cephi Moon, Part Two

Wow! Some unusual things are happening in this chapter. It reads as of maybe Detective Jana Burke might be saved by an unusual power. I'll have to read more, Bev. Well written.

April


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Hi, April. Thank you for this generous and encouraging review. It's nice to have you back reading and commenting from your unique perspective. Warm regards, Bev
Comment by
AprilShower
 
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Rating of Chapter 61 -
Cephi Moon, Part 1

There's a lot of suspense this chapter, Bev. It's kind of scary, but I'm anxious to read more. This has kept my attention all the way through. It's well written.

If you wonder why I haven't been around for a while. We've had health problems here at our house. I've spent much time with my husband at hospitals and doctors' offices. I don't know how long it will take for life to get back to normal. I keep praying that it will.

April


 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    April, I'm very sorry to hear that you've had so much to deal with recently. That can drain, not only energy, but finances. I will add you to my prayer list, if you don't mind, that you find your way moving back into the light. I did wonder where you'd gone.

    Thanks for taking time out today to read my chapters, April. I appreciate the encouragement and great generosity.

    :) Bev

reply by AprilShower on 31-Aug-2014

    Prayers always help, Bev. Thank you.

    You have a very exciting story.

    April :o)

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
    You're welcome, April. And thanks for your compliment. :) Bev
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
really excellent piece of reading so much detail went into this memory loss i relate to that 100 percent from a past experience sometimes shuts out the nightmare beautifully penned god bless


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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much, Darkhorse. I really appreciate you taking time out to read and review so generously! :) Bev
Comment by
Mary Ann MCPhedran
 
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
I enjoyed reading your story, and although I came in a t he end I still was able to follow and it was entertaining. Thanks fpr sharing. Mary


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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
    Hi, Mary Ann, thank you much for this very generous review. I appreciate it! :) Bev
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Rosalyne
 
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
Hi, Bev.
Wow!!!! You have written a fabulous book! The ending is wrapped up perfectly and ties up all the characters so well. This, my friend, is a winner!! Not only will it be published, but become a best seller. Bravo to you! Awesome story, characters, dialogue and plot!
Bye
Hugs
Rosalyne :)


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
    Rosalyne, I can't wait to thank you in person for all your lovely support and how you radiated enthusiasm, even when I wasn't feeling it. You truly helped keep me on track, my friend.
    What a lovely person you are!

    Glad you liked the wrap-up. A few thought it needed a different angle, but at 70 chapters I really had to find a cut-off point LoL.

    Thanks for this awesome review and for all of it over this past two years.

    Hugs, Bev
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Patrick G Cox
 
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
Hi Bev,

You've certainly drawn all the straws together in this finale, some of them could be expanded a little I think to make a dialogue - particularly the cop who commented on the missing braid.

That said, the Devil Dog is still 'out there' frustrated, but unable to return and control until something creates a pathway again ... And Fr Brian seems to have been fired up by the Holy Spirit in his encounter. Having met men inspired like this - yes, they do 'radiate'.

Patrick


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
    Hi, Patrick. I really appreciate your insights. With seventy chapters at this point, I am going to have to trim in a big way when it comes to submitting this to a publisher. The epilogue was to try to bring some closure to the story as it really could have gone on for another four or five more. So your perspective is certainly one I'll consider when the changes occur.

    Thanks for all your support and encouragement. You've had a real inside track on this latter part of the novel, and I think it comes from your own faith and experience. In any case, it resonated with what I was trying to say.

    Yes, the devil dog will most certainly be looking for its next victim and has an even deeper hatred for Father Brian now.

    To be continued... :)
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
This is a wonderful ending to this novel. I hate to see it go but all good things must come to an end. I will pray you find a publisher who will do this novel justice.


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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
    Thank you so very much, Barbara. That's really most kind of you to keep me in your prayers. I'm sure it will help! And thank you, most of all, for all your encouragement and support. It's been absolutely invaluable, my friend.

    :) Bev
Comment by
OLA THOMAS
 
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
Glad that I'm privileged to read this last post; although I read just a few of your posts, but I think I enjoyed this one really with its finesse and details.

ola thomas


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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
    Hi, Ola. Thank you so much for your gracious review. I appreciate you taking time to read the epilogue. Your words are most gratifying.
    :) Bev
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