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Along the Jericho Road


Murder Mystery

  40 total reviews 
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CR Delport
 
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
Congratulations on finishing the book. That is no small accomplishment. With this last post, you tie all the pieces together. This is really a great story and I enjoyed every post. Well done. The 6 is for the book overall and not just for this post.


 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much, CR. What a faithful reader you've been. I've always enjoyed the benefits of your insights and encouragement. Thank you so very much for the six and, more, the loyal support. Warm regards, Bev
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
Well done.I can only imagine the relief you feel with the conclusion of this brilliant novel.When are we reading the next one?keep writing!


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
    Hello, my friend. I am relieved that I'm not under the 'gun' to post regularly as I pretty much wrote the story by the seat of my pants as they say. But I have a lot of editing work ahead of me. Meanwhile, I'm going to be putting out a new project very soon on the site.

    Thanks so much for the support and encouragement. I very much appreciate you!

    :) Bev
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This has been a wonderful story, Bev, even just the last part that I was privileged to read. I liked the way your conclusion covered all the characters because that is very satisfactory for a reader. In my humble opinion you are an excellent, (that doesn't seem inadequate,) writer and I for one admire your ability, Giddy


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much, Giddy. I am so very appreciative of your wonderful review and am honored by your very kind words of encouragement. You're such a sweet lady! :) Bev
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chasennov
 
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Cancega Moon
Along the Jericho Road 'Cancega Moon.' Another excellent chapter added to your book, Bev. I enjoyed the read as always. Should it perhaps be; Below(,) the sun turned the sky crimson red....Well done.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Thanks so much, C. I appreciate your generous review and sharp eagle eye! Hope you have a great holiday weekend. :) Bev

reply by chasennov on 28-Aug-2014
    You are most welcome, Bev. Have a great weekend, I know I will. Kind regards.

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Thanks again, C. :) Bev
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Cancega Moon
Nice to see your photo - and I bet you are chuffed that your book is now finally finished? Happy and sad together. You have closed the story well by letting your readers know just what happened to all the characters, good and bad. What next? Well done my professional-writing friend!


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Another project in the wings -- a novel I started a few years back but never finished. The first chapter will be out next week.

    Thanks, Kay, for your kind insights and encouragements. Yes, I am feeling a bit sad today, but I will be living with the novel for some time yet as I work to edit it for (hopefully) publication.

    Hugs, Bev


reply by Aussie on 28-Aug-2014
    Dis old lady hopes you be happy camper soon!

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Aw, thanks so much, Kay. I'm actually dealing with my blues by editing my next novel's first chapter LoL. :) Bev
Comment by
c_lucas
 
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Cancega Moon
The sixer is for all the hard work you put into your story which was very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Charlie, thank you so much. You contributed to the novel on so many levels. A heartfelt thank you and a big virtual hug! :) Bev

reply by c_lucas on 29-Aug-2014
    You're welcome, Bev. Waiting for your next endeavor

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
    Thanks so much, Charlie. It's a re-posting, so I may have a few questions if you don't mind. :) Bev

reply by c_lucas on 29-Aug-2014
    Ask away. Nameless does it all the time. Heck, even I will stop and ask myself questions.(LOL)
    You're welcome, Bev. Charlie

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
    Thanks, Charlie. I'm going to be putting an old novel back out. 'Tom' provided some basic instructions which I hope will become obvious when I go to do it LoL.
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Acquired Taste
 
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A very good ending to what I can only assume was a fabulous book! I'm sorry, I've not read any of your material, but this wrap-up has encouraged to me read several chapters. Good writing is good writing - review or not, I truly enjoy a good read.

Congratulations on a most wrothy accomplishment! Regards, AT=/


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Hello AT. How very kind of you to review so generously. I really appreciate your encouragement and congratulations! Warmest regards, Bev
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Cancega Moon
Bev, his epilogue brought tears to my eyes! One, because you wrapped everything up so nicely, and two, I will miss this amazing thriller. I must confess, I got a bit of a chill with Edward Pearce's body being donated to science. I wouldn't want to be the medical student cutting into that body. A six foot spider could emerge!

A HEARTY congratulations on completing a worthy project; a book and story of your own creation. An enormous accomplishment, Bev.


 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    A six foot spider - that's a terrific visual, my friend.

    Marietta, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your encouragement, support and generosity. I thought I'd feel a bit relieved when I typed THE END, but was surprised at feeling lost a bit -- and sad. I think that's why I waited so long to post the epilogue. BTW, I used your format as inspiration.

    Well, as we've discussed, on to other projects. I'm lucky to have a wonderful friend and ally in you.

    Hugs, Bev

reply by Green Lake Girl on 28-Aug-2014
    Wasn't that the size of the spider that harassed Pearce in one of your chapters? At least it loomed that large in my imagination! LOL

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Oh gosh, you have a better memory than I do, Marietta. You're right LoL. :)
Comment by
James Dooney
 
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Rating of Chapter 70 -
Cancega Moon
I used to be a police officer so I must admit I am still engaged by criminal stories ! Like this one 1 You have done well here !

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 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Hi, James. Thank you for this great review! I really admire anyone who has been a policeman. You folks are on the line each and every day. Unlike the hoopla that returning soldiers get, so often you are under-appreciated. I'm very gratified by your interest in my story!

    Warmest regards, Bev
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Well, the journey has ended, Bev. I know I was on most of it with you and learned a lot from your writing.

Now, take a breather -- but for only a week or so -- until you begin another of Jana Burke's adventures.

I'll be there for each chapter.

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 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Jay, thank you for this most gracious reply. I don't think there's much at all I could 'teach' a very fine writer like you!

    I'm not going to be doing a sequel for probably six months or so. I'll be busy whipping my current novel into shape with the help of an editor. However, I do have an old novel I didn't finish that will provide lighter material and a different kind of challenge. That's up next.

    Again, thanks so much for this kind and very generous review, my friend.

    :) Bev


reply by Jay Squires on 28-Aug-2014
    Good luck with the editing, and when published, let me know.

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Thanks for the good wishes, Jay. I will certainly let you know if and when :) Bev
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