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Tea with Tattoo Tony


An old lady finds a reason to keep on living.

  20 total reviews 
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Muffins
 
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Rating of Chapter 19 -
Name-calling
People are getting over heated and alliances are quickly changing. It's like being in an household run by schizophrenics, and with Felicity and Patricia at the head of this mess, things can only get stranger.



















 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
    Are you having any problems following the storyline. Let me know, please as I haven't started a rewrite yet.
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Rating of Chapter 17 -
Wanted: One Confession
Now, Tony has come back of begin almost non-essential. Felicity is showing an unsure side of herself; she's breaking down in front of other people. I like where this is going.


 Comment Written 11-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
    Thanks, Muffins. Secrets must be kept. That's where Tony helps out.
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Rating of Chapter 15 -
Charles
At this point, I don't feel Tony's presence is necessary anymore. He was a good bit of comedic relief in the beginning. Now, you have three strong, colorful vibrant woman taking over. I'm curious to find out if Tony has anything else to surprise the woman with. The women and myself could be wrong about Tony. Let's see!


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
    Tony definitely plays a big part later on. :-)
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Rating of Chapter 14 -
Claws Out!
The tension is rising and I love the way parts of Felicity's past and personality is dipping out with each line. One juicy surprise after another. Patricia's clueless of her sister's life proves how much she is in her own bubble.


 Comment Written 10-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
    Thanks again for the ongoing feedback. Can't wait to see what you think of the ending.
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Rating of Chapter 13 -
Reality Strikes
Delicious treats of revelations keeps coming like an all you can eat sweet shop. Felicity truly keeps things close to her chest shocking her sister and the reader.
It appears Patricia might have been daddy's pat on the head daughter but Felicity is the one he respected and trusted.


 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    So glad my characters are coming through to you as they should. I plan to smooth this out and enter it in a playwriting contest sometime in the future.

reply by Muffins on 10-Jun-2014
    That is a good idea. Good luck!!
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Rating of Chapter 8 -
Deceptions
A vigorous bled of vengeance, pride and lust. These two ladies are a dying breed, brutality with class, well at least Felicity is more than Patricia.


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
    Love your comments, Muffins. I owe you one. :-)
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Rating of Chapter 9 -
Lights, Camera, Action
For the moment, Tony & Erma are on team Felicity. Maybe, Tony isn't such a dummy. He picked up quick on Partrica's line and knocked her back in her place.

Poor Grant Howard, he just made an enemy for life.


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
    LOL I've forgotten this. Now I 'll have to go back and read. Appreciate your devotion. Know any community theater that would like to put it on for free?

reply by Muffins on 02-Jun-2014
    Sorry, my influences don't reach that far! Yet.
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
The Battle Begins
The back and forth explosive dialogue between the sisters raises the stakes to a new an higher level. We are now allow to witness and discover the past, present and possible future considering these sisters. Tony's entrance is a game changer. Let's see if Patricia response as Felicity expects her to.


 Comment Written 30-May-2014



reply by the author on 30-May-2014
    Raising the stakes is what scriptwriting is all about. So I thank you so much for using that term.
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
Felicity's Past
The action is heating up. Felicity is a smart one, thinks on her feet. Thank goodness Tony is easy to manipulate and can go along with the program.


 Comment Written 27-May-2014



reply by the author on 27-May-2014
    Lots of twists and turns to come, Muffins.
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Rating of Chapter 5 -
Sibling Rivalry
I can't wait to find out about Felicity in her younger years. I'm guessing she prance about with a slick, tough, shot you first, ask questions later attitude. These characters keep cracking me up and wanting more.


 Comment Written 27-May-2014



reply by the author on 27-May-2014
    Thanks, Muffins. Good to know this is keeping your interest. :-)

reply by Muffins on 27-May-2014
    This script is so good.
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