People are getting over heated and alliances are quickly changing. It's like being in an household run by schizophrenics, and with Felicity and Patricia at the head of this mess, things can only get stranger.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
Are you having any problems following the storyline. Let me know, please as I haven't started a rewrite yet.
At this point, I don't feel Tony's presence is necessary anymore. He was a good bit of comedic relief in the beginning. Now, you have three strong, colorful vibrant woman taking over. I'm curious to find out if Tony has anything else to surprise the woman with. The women and myself could be wrong about Tony. Let's see!
The tension is rising and I love the way parts of Felicity's past and personality is dipping out with each line. One juicy surprise after another. Patricia's clueless of her sister's life proves how much she is in her own bubble.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
Thanks again for the ongoing feedback. Can't wait to see what you think of the ending.
Delicious treats of revelations keeps coming like an all you can eat sweet shop. Felicity truly keeps things close to her chest shocking her sister and the reader.
It appears Patricia might have been daddy's pat on the head daughter but Felicity is the one he respected and trusted.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
So glad my characters are coming through to you as they should. I plan to smooth this out and enter it in a playwriting contest sometime in the future.
The back and forth explosive dialogue between the sisters raises the stakes to a new an higher level. We are now allow to witness and discover the past, present and possible future considering these sisters. Tony's entrance is a game changer. Let's see if Patricia response as Felicity expects her to.
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
Raising the stakes is what scriptwriting is all about. So I thank you so much for using that term.
I can't wait to find out about Felicity in her younger years. I'm guessing she prance about with a slick, tough, shot you first, ask questions later attitude. These characters keep cracking me up and wanting more.
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
Thanks, Muffins. Good to know this is keeping your interest. :-)