HI Columbo, will there is always that one person that comes out of the woodwork when someone dies...and of course not everyone wants curtain things to be found out....and I'm with Detective Adrian...just can't put my finger on it Yet!!!LOL...every chapter gets better...Luff Linda xxoo like playing Clue!!!luff Linda xxoo
This is really exciting and is taking off nicely. So many possibilities -- I love the way you brig in the oldies Like Mick Jagger and the Stones. I thought this was well-told and formatted, with just enough action and mystery to keep the reader intrigued. Well done.
I think it will be an interesting story when you get the foundation laid. I will let the writer critic the writing and I will just say what I find interesting. LOL That should cover everything. Good job. Nancy
Fifty one per cent for the oldest child. That is Ruby. That could be a major war if she came forward. But she may be the best one to run the company. Seniors death is already suspicious. It will be hard to shut down the investigations, official and unofficial. Great work.
I think you are right to include the different facets of all the characters so we the readers can understand the intrigue and plot better and see what roles they play in the unravelling. Your characterisations are always well drawn. Interesting chapter, keep up the good work. Faye