Again, congratulations on great character development and a storyline that continues to intrigue the reader. This seems to be moving along at just the right pace, at this point. I also love the inclusion of cryogenics to the plot. It seems very original and intriguing in itself. This has been interesting to read and follow.
The story has become very meaty, which is good as it holds the interest. The characters are all interesting and likeable. The narrative and descriptions are good and it was a great chapter as always. I am a bit behind with reviews as I am busy preparing my next book for the publisher. I may vanish soon if I get too busy to post, but not for good. Hope you continue to review my poems, I value your opinion. Faye
Hi Michael, don't like to say...did you mean...I owe you one...love Lucy with the kids...a natural...and Bard got some pretty good stuff out of the trash...lets see what they find...next!!! Luff Linda xxoo
Uhmm, I wonder if there are any surprises in the will. An excellent plot is developing. Suspense is building. What can Lincoln tell Lucy, I wonder? Will Tenaya be able to unravel the puzzle that is The Bard?
Blackwell had already passed here[her?] on the road as she drove up.
"I owe you won.[one]
You'd never think she heard the old adage,"The Butler did it?" LOL There's a couple of spags I detected.
Do you think kids under five foot tall know they are under five foot? Maybe the older ones. How many kids? Who do they belong to?
Looking forward to more. Nancy