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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Diamond Dancer & Working Lincoln"

A homeless man sees more than people realize.

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So far, besides Bard, Lucy is my favorite character. Oh how I could have used her when I had all those ornery foster teens. lol Now a crazy uncle? what could be better. Still looks like a movie to me.

"I owe you (won). I haven't..." (one)


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Again, congratulations on great character development and a storyline that continues to intrigue the reader. This seems to be moving along at just the right pace, at this point. I also love the inclusion of cryogenics to the plot. It seems very original and intriguing in itself. This has been interesting to read and follow.


 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014


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loved the image mikey i always look upon the harp as angelic She had never heard a harp play anything but angel music excellent read dear friend beautifully penned as always


 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014


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The story has become very meaty, which is good as it holds the interest. The characters are all interesting and likeable. The narrative and descriptions are good and it was a great chapter as always. I am a bit behind with reviews as I am busy preparing my next book for the publisher. I may vanish soon if I get too busy to post, but not for good. Hope you continue to review my poems, I value your opinion. Faye


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Mikey, and the nuggets of information keep on coming as the plot goes deeper and the frustration of not finding a monetary link to Ruby makes the anticipation grow. Interesting direction. :0 GracieAnn


 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014


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Another interesting Mikey trip, mate. Good work interesting meandering through your head mate. Some spags and some comments.

out from bel(-l)ow or is that a deliberate spelling error?
a couple (of)hours
11 kids must be nearly time for Maria to turn up from the Convent huh!
"I owe you won??. I haven't had an outing


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Hi Michael, don't like to say...did you mean...I owe you one...love Lucy with the kids...a natural...and Bard got some pretty good stuff out of the trash...lets see what they find...next!!! Luff Linda xxoo


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I OWE YOU WON SHOULD BE ONE MIKEY SOUNDS LIKE A MIXED UP FAMILY WITH PEOPLE SOME WHAAT OUT OF KILTER BUT IT IS KIND OF MYSTERIOUS TOO


 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014


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Uhmm, I wonder if there are any surprises in the will. An excellent plot is developing. Suspense is building. What can Lincoln tell Lucy, I wonder? Will Tenaya be able to unravel the puzzle that is The Bard?


 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014


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Blackwell had already passed here[her?] on the road as she drove up.
"I owe you won.[one]
You'd never think she heard the old adage,"The Butler did it?" LOL There's a couple of spags I detected.
Do you think kids under five foot tall know they are under five foot? Maybe the older ones. How many kids? Who do they belong to?
Looking forward to more. Nancy


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