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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "It's Showtime!"

A homeless man sees more than people realize.

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Hi Michael, so glad I checked back to see if I missed something...was off a couple days...Ok Lucy is now in...Bard is losing his mind a bit further...and Harpster is still wondering about Ruby...and oh Lucy...lets see where she goes...Next!!! getting down and dirty...love it...Luff Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 15-May-2014



reply by the author on 16-May-2014
    Yep, the Bard and I think that having a sane mind is overrated!! mikey

reply by l.raven on 16-May-2014
    LOL...luff
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Still a great story. Hope I can do as well and get as much help as think you are with all this.
I think I am nearly caught up, will see,
One spag this time. Get my(e) home by ten though,


 Comment Written 15-May-2014



reply by the author on 16-May-2014
    The best help is questioning little things. Or they'll comment something like "What happened to" and then name a character I forgot about! Or they'll point out that something happened to easily. Nothing big, but it all helps keep it on track. Then some great ideas pop up once in a while too. Angles that hadn't occurred to me at all.
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They'd watch their mom and make her taste the apple pie before they'd have a bite. << LOL! Love it!

Very good, and the news announcement is sure to have a big effect. :)


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That announcement from Q is sure going to through the cat among the pigeons. This is another great and well written chapter.


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Yep, entertaining and this fills in the blanks. Looks like Ruby Dancer is gonna get Blackwell publishing. Getting mysterious, with the shades. They got Lucy. I wonder what will happen next? Only Mikey knows. I owed you one, here she is. Count your doubloons, Lion King. Yep, wackydo is in control right now. I'm trigger happy! not selfish like Ole' Rickey. ha! ha!


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Woooo!!! It's on now. Great set up for all of this. It all makes perfect sense and follows logically. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!! Excellent chapter. The Bard's little diatribes are classic!!! NG


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Very realistically written, with great thought to the workings of the criminal mind. The story is flowing along at a steady pace and it is a great read. Faye


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It looks like the proverbial feces is about to hit the fan. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.


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