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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "The Harbor Cruz!"

A homeless man sees more than people realize.

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With the likes of Winston and Khin, you can almost expect something to go wrong. They are too unpredictable. This is another well crafted chapter.

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 Comment Written 23-May-2014


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Good work mate. Where ya bin have not heard anything fro you for a looooong time. What gives?
Some general chatter and some spags.

Harpster(')s
Hehe how di9d you know I started on the sugar and cinnamon toast other day hehe

get lucky and the(-y) bad guys

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 Comment Written 23-May-2014



reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    Running around buried!! They're making me work here with the folks at the home. Some problems that require some counseling and soothing and the like. Working out fine though. Trying to get caught up. I stay on top of reviews and I READ my reviews always. Just way behind in responding and thanking. Internet up and down. Plenty of time to write. So no problem posting. Have I missed any postings of yours? I think I'm up to date. Let me know! mikey

reply by Sankey on 23-May-2014
    Hi mate not sure I added some more dialogue like you wanted some place forget which one. In the process transferring all the stuff to Word now. WIll look at your instructions again to see how to count the words ha. Did you make just one file for a whole book or a file f0or each chapter? I have done a file for each chapter. about half way so far.

reply by the author on 23-May-2014
    I write in word first actually. So I copy from word to the site. I have the whole story in one place. The problem with my "books" is that they're Fanstory books. The chapters aren't really chapters and I have a little cliffhanger every thousand words or so. Hahaha. So, a lot of editing when I get around to it. But, you can't beat the input and help!! mikey

reply by Sankey on 23-May-2014
    Well I may try and do it the way you are from now on. I have found some more stuff about churches and people in them and as I type to you I am about to add another chapter right at the spot I am at as I transfer from FS to Word. Thanks still gotta figure out how to get the word count hehe. Will read your instructions later.
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