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Let's Go Camping


The Hedgerow friends are bored.

  29 total reviews 
Comment by
Tanvi Pauddar
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Awesome story. I really enjoyed reading it, and was fully into it. It was awesome! I liked that you made the main characters animals, instead of humans. Nice use of your imagination. I loved reading it a ton, and could read it over and over again, without getting bored.
:) -tanvi


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
    Thank you again for delving into my portfolio, Tanvi. The picture is of my characters, I think you can see who is who. :) Thank you so much for the six stars, and the amazing review!! Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
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This is a very good children's fiction you have penned down here. It is light and refreshing and the intersting dialogues kept me engaged till the end.


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much for your lovely review, Hareem.S. I am really pleased you enjoyed it! :) Sandra
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seken58
 
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I loved this delightful children's story.
What a lovely group of animal characters and a fun way to promote healthy lifestyle habits, friendship, sharing and co-operation.
A great image choice.


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review of my children's story. I am really so pleased you enjoyed it. And a huge hug to the 6 stars!! :) Sandra.
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Wonderful story for children and so appropriate for this time of year, that is Father's Day
Good use of dialogue and a truly enjoyable rad


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
    Thank you very much, emrpoems, for your lovely review. I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! :) xsx Sandra
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kiwijenny
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I wish I had a six for this...it is adorable....I love the camping story with a daddy,...right here near Father's Day...I love the reality woven amongst the fantasy......mice and squirrel mole and vole all in a Van and tents....and the names are so adorable...especially Cyril ....:o)
God bless


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
    LOL, Everyone loves Cyril! Thank you so much for your really wonderful review, it's worth double the 6 stars. :) I'm really chuffed that you enjoyed it. :) xsx Sandra
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rhymelord
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Dear Sandra,
Good yarn. Simple clear language and syntax. Excellent young kiddies' story. Long time since I have heard "tickity-boo". Just one small nit I'm afraid:

drove it round to the front of the house just as (the) every one arrived at the gate.

Drop the bracketed "(the)".

Regards
Reg


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much, Reg, for your lovely review. I'm really pleased you liked this children's story. The one 'nit' has gone! I have just been back and removed it, thank you so much for finding it. It doesn't matter how many times I go over my work, there are always some left that 'hide' from me! :) Sandra.
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Hello, dear Ms. Potter/Enid Blyton,

I loved reading another critter story from you magic pen. As long as Sandra keeping writing her children's tales, my world remains a marvelous place, you know. :)

Love always,

Sonali

reached the (campsite).


water. It (could) be very dangerous if they



 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
    My dear Sonali, you always put a smile on my face, this time, you put a look of amazement on my face. Only TWO errors!!! How brilliant is that? I have been waiting for the long list of errors I knew you would find, and there was only two! I might at last be getting somewhere with my grammar! LOL. Thank you as always, my really lovely friend, for your lovely review. :) xx Sandra

reply by Selina Stambi on 03-Jun-2014
    You've come a lon-ong way baby! xxx
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That was a super kids' story, with lovable characters and cute story line. The dialogue was great and the narrative and descriptions excellent. Most enjoyable and lovely illustration. Faye


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much for your lovely review, Faye, I am really pleased you enjoyed it. xsx Sandra :)
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Let's Go Camping is a great kids story. absolutely loved it and could see the younger kids absolutely loving it. Would be a great story for kindergarten and 1st graders nice work fun story


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much, Laura, for your wonderful review. I am so pleased you enjoyed my children's story. Thank you for reading it. :) Sandra
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Ideasaregems-Dawn
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Oh Sandra, what a wonderful story for children! I read carefully, but the only tiny (possible) nit I found is this: "Reggie the Rat was the first to jump out of the van(;)..."<< I think that a semi-colon would go here, but honestly, I'm not completely sure - perhaps making this a sentence on its own would be better? (I'm afraid punctuation is my weakness...:( << but I tried...LOL)

Simply outstanding! Even though it's a story for children, I was completely engrossed. :)


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
    You carry on trying, my dear friend, I have changed it into a sentence on its own, it reads much better now, so big thank you for that. You are better at grammar than I am. LOL. A huge hug and thank you for your wonderful review and shiny 6 stars as well!! Thank you! xsx Sandra :)
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