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Comment by
Raul1
JOSE CONDE
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  Rank:  159
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Very humorous! I just kept on laughing the whole time. Excellent writing. I would keep on reading it forever. kidding! Keep up the laughs, buddy. Excellent!


 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018



reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
    Raul, thanks for the cute comments. Obviously there has been a stuff-up here. The poem that should have held that spot was one I disabled because it was entered in an outside contest. Then when I tried to re-enable it, the poem had vanished and I haven't got round to fixing it yet - partly because I didn't think anyone would ever stumble across the now non-existent poem.

    Although, in a weird kind of way, the text as it now stands, almost fits the title of Disabled Poem!

    If you like I can rummage around and find the text of the original (which is really quite funny)

    Sorry for the misunderstanding.

    Steve
Comment by
joeruptak
 
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Exceptional
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I enjoyed this so much I read it over twice
I can only say good things about it the humor was fantastic,
the rhyme and flow was right on. fantastic job


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015



reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Joe - you must have been rooting around in the archives to come across this one!

    Steve
Comment by
pattipac
 
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Your poem of KayCee's phone addiction, and ultimate demise is creatively spun with a rhyme-scheme and humor that make it an enjoyable read. Deserving of a six, but alas my pockets are empty.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
    Thank you!

    Steve
Comment by
Sasha
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Sasha
 
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This is absolutely hysterical. I can relate to the cautionary tale but have to admit my kids were before cellphones and I don't even own one...so I guess I safe.


 Comment Written 07-Oct-2014



reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
    .... and thanks for back-tracking and finding this one, too. I hope to end up with a series that may be publishable.

    Steve
Comment by
robbme
 
 
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Oh, the information age! Where we can look up anything we could possibly want to on those tiny handheld devices (most of which are not so tiny anymore), yet all we seem to want to look up is cute cat videos and celebrity gossip.

A wonderful read! I quite enjoyed this as the irony is that mine never leaves my side either but I'm smart enough to get it out of my ear when need be. Nice to have something to laugh at today as I quite needed that so I thank you.


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
    Thanks for the kind words and the six stars.

    Perhaps a little surprisingly, this has made its way to the top of the Best Poems list, so it must have struck a chord (or a funny-bone) with most people.

    Steve
Comment by
Drew Delaney
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Wonderful! It is engaging and hilarious as well. Thoroughly enjoyed the read. I hope you do well with your idea of a book. This would be so much fun to read a collection. Wow! You go girl!


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2014



reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
    Thanks, Drew - glad you enjoyed.

    Steve
Comment by
Judy Couch
 
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This is funny and fun to read. I especially liked the ending where she became an answering machine. Something parents of teenage girls are going to fear.


 Comment Written 25-Jul-2014



reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
    Thanks, Judy - glad you enjoyed this piece of nonsense.

    Steve
Comment by
maggieadams
 
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Exceptional
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This well rhymed and rhythmic poem is indeed a cautionary tale....really too close to the truth, I am afraid. I loved that it became far-fetched, instead of her dieing while texting and driving. Keep writing these tales about the misuse of technology...maybethey will get through. Well done, Steve.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2014



reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
    Thanks, Maggie, for the great review and the six stars - much appreciated.

    Steve
Comment by
nelliesellie
 
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I love the picture. I love the poem. It could be a good moral for modern teenagers. Do not become to attached to your phone. It will take over your life and you can become an answering machine. Great work.


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014



reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    Thanks fo the kind words.

    Steve
Comment by
Treischel
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What a delightful and well written story takl written in poetic format with a peppery tetrameter and aabb rhyming. It flowed very well and was interesting throughout. Loved the humor. The poetry was excellent. I'll have to look some of your other work.


 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014



reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
    Thanks for the great review and the six stars - I appreciate it.

    Steve
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