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The Different Faces Of Love


Love has many faces, even those unseen

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Tatarka2
 
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Rating of Chapter 27 -
Rain
This gets a 6 because if this poem doesn't deserve it, I don't know what does. So much emotion, and so well described. Never overdone; the reader senses the bereft child, not so much as an object of pity, but "sees" him or her, and feels their longing and pain. This is so well done.


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Thank you so much. I hope yo have a wonderful day. I I express great gratitude for this fine review.
    My best wishes,
    have a great day.
    RGstar
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Jumbo J
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Rating of Chapter 27 -
Rain
Hi Roy,
this is my sixth and last attempt to send this review... the glitches that are created by change are becoming a tad of a pain.

Now that the whining is over back to your review.

You have a very smooth delivery... you set up the perfect story through deep and meaningful tones of loss and connection... love through the loss of a mother... and the soothing connection within the rain... especially the significant refrain of the gentle drops of autumn rain... an obvious time frame reference.

This was a sad but wonderfully gripping lament and all in your magically unique style of class.

Your classic reading ability and rich vocal tones, again gave the added wings of brilliance of being able to hear and connect with the actual intent of the composer, which in my opinion allowed the imagery to come to life. Your collaboration with Kerri Powles once again has complimented your words with a fitting depth.

You, my brother are one of my favorites, there's no denying that, and why would I? Smile))))).

All the very best wishes for this very special and hotly contested honor... Poet of the Month... yeah, that got a really nice ring to it!!!

With our thoughts we create,
the invisible thread of always,
James.


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
    Thanks, my brother. They seldom write them like you.
    Best wishes my friend.
    I appreciate your support to the max.
    Have a great day.
    RG
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pipersfancy
 
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Rating of Chapter 27 -
Rain
Hi RG - as always, very nice work! Steeped in emotion that never overdoes itself, and your voice adding levels of understanding that, otherwise, might be overlooked by the reader. The image of the child, straining to, and thinking he hears the voice of his mother in the gently falling rain... very touching. And true... when a loved one passes, reminders of that person and that love are seen and heard everywhere. They never really leave us. 'Rain' is a most appropriate choice to be selected as a contender for POM!

PF


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
    Thank you.
    My best to you for a lovely review.
    Thanks for the kind words.
    Have a great day.
    RGstar
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Rain
Beautiful as always. You elevate the form, my friend. I can only hope that you choose to stay with FS. If not. please let me know where I can continue to drink from the RG cup. DJ


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
    Thank you, DJ.
    I have just changed the system back to the old system. So good to see reviews in the normal way.
    Best wishes, DJ. I will endeavor to stay around, with hope.
    RG
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Brabazon
 
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Rain
Your poem is the third I have read in the last hour and half. It seems sublime relative to the others. The elegance is in the mood I felt while reading. I noticed you were careful to avoid a bumpy ride and there was A kind of nuance in the rhymes you used. I will like to be like you when I grow up. I was born in 1970.


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
    Well , you are already grown up, and I think you are doing fine, just be like yourself. There is nobody like you...that is the beauty of being. You will get to where you want...just patience, repetition, and eyes wide open. :)
    Best wishes, my friend. Thank you.
    RGstar
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Rating of Chapter 27 -
Rain
The magic in this poem resides in the spiritual cleansing the reader experiences as he feels the rain deliver memories in tiny droplets that are akin to snapshots of an ongoing relationship that continues to grow, even in death.
Do you share your work on youtube?


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
    No. Do you? I have never thought about it. I put a Beatles poem there about a year ago, independent to this. I am not sure what it would do there, and wouldn't that scare publishers ?

    Thank you so much for the support.
    Best wishes,
    RG
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Rain
I just love this poem. Well written,great rhyming and rhythm . Have run out of words to write here except its excellent.keep Up the good work
cheers mainlandlady55 a new Fan story author and poet


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
    Thank you so much. I appreciate the support. My best to you today.
    Rgstar
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GWinterwin
 
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Rain
What a beautiful poem with words to touch the heart. Good word flow and rhyming make it great. Touching my memory of my dear mother, and how much I miss her. Great poem with words that truly make one think back in time.


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
    Thank you, GW
    I appreciate the support.
    Have a great day.
    RGstar
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Tayari
 
 
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Rain
Excellent job. I love the audio in the background that helps paint the vivid picture of your words. When I see things like this it makes me understand how much I'm glad to have found this site. Thanks for sharing beloved


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
    Thanks my friend.
    my best wishes.
    Have a great day.
    RGstar

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
    Thank you so much.
    My best wishes,
    RGstar
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MizKat
 
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Rating of Chapter 27 -
Rain
Hi RG,

Your poem is beautiful and written well. I always enjoy reading your work as you do such a great fob of writing. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

Kat


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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
    You are welcome, MizKat.
    Thank you so much. I appreciate the support.
    My best wishes,
    have a good evening.
    RGstar
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