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Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?

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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Bara It's Gert I stating from the beginning of your new novel.
I like your idea of what you call working notes
This way I know something about each of your characters.
To me it sounds like an interesting story.


 Comment Written 30-May-2015



reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    I am so glad you are back but I'm sorry you have to read this without it having money attached. You're a true friend.

reply by Gert sherwood on 31-May-2015
    Smiles
    will read another chapter soon.
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Eric1
 
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Hi Barbara, well this chapter does explain a lot and gives the reader a lot of insight as to characters both past and present.


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2015



reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015
    Thank you for going back and reading. I sure hope it helps what's going on.

reply by Eric1 on 23-Feb-2015
    It Has Barbara.

reply by Eric1 on 23-Feb-2015
    It Has Barbara.
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Margaret Snowdon
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This was a good idea to post
the info as it helps those of
us who came into the story later
to identify the characters

Thanks, Barbara.

Margaret


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2015



reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
    I try to be user friendly, but sometimes, it doesn't happen right. Thank you for the kind review.
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Excellent descriptions. I do pretty much the same thing. I write character descriptions. I write location descriptions and more. Summaries and outlines are essential to keep writing on track. I read a later chapter, which I rated 6 stars. This is the first novel on Fan Story that compelled me to read it from the beginning. So far, wonderful work. I hope to see it in print soon!


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
    Thank you for your encouraging words.
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seaglass
 
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I started your book. I love stories that include Native American, My children are one forth so we have introduced them to cultural. Plus I worked on Several reservations. This chapter outlines the characters very well. This will make it easer to process the personalities as I start into the next chapter.


 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I'm sorry you had to read this without it being promoted.
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lakeport
 
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Working notes, indeed that's must be wonderful ranch and so big.there is a lot of history. I enjoyed reading the story,God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.


 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014



reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
    Thank you for going all the way back. Since I have posted that, I have changed a few things, but updated it.

reply by lakeport on 02-Aug-2014
    your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.
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I'm really glad I'm only back a couple of chapters. It will be easy to catch up. I love the story already and just reading the Prologue. That Soni is quite a woman: fly her own helicopter, horseback rides, drives a Range Rover and carries a Bowie knife. Sounds like my kine of sister.


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2014



reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
    Thank you for the kind review. I can't believe you went all the way back. Thank you.
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Dear Barbara,

This should make an interesting book. It seems all the characters are Texas tall and tough as nails. Loaded for bear and that's a fact.

I would spell out all the numbers. It makes for easier reading.

Warm regards,

Winslow


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
    Thank you.
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Sonaleeka
 
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Awesome writing..very well written ....story telling is flawless..Romance on of my fav ..Just loved it..

God Bless!Have a nice daay


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this review.
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Cajungirl
 
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So far you have captured my attention. I look forward to reading along. If it is anything like your last novel, it will be great. I wish you much success with this one.


 Comment Written 26-Jun-2014



reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this review.
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