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Small and Hungry


Duck Fun abcb Part of my little family

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Comment by
Joy Graham
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That is a cute picture :) Animals know who provides them with treats. I think you captured the essence of this picture spot on.

This is a pay it forward review as Cat's idea. I searched your portfolio to find a post that needed one more review to bump it up to blue ribbon or all time best status.

Merry Christmas to you and your family, Lulube!


 Comment Written 11-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 14-Dec-2015
    OMG so nice of you, We have a blue ribbon now. Great way to en d the year
    THxs for your wonderful search and review, Joy

    All the best to you and your clan.

    lulube
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Small and hungry, beautiful Picture, that's a very lovely story poem. Very nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport,


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
    thxs so much for enjoying this and for your review lakey.


    lulube

reply by lakeport on 25-Sep-2014
    your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.
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Hi Lubube,
Yeah, what a cute pic, accompanied by a fun and entertaining write... just made my smile hit my face straight away... we don't have Raccoons here in OZ, but if we did, yeah, I'm the type of sucker that would be out feeding them... got a bad habit of naming all the animals, I feed, lizards and all... yeah totally cute... thanks for the feel good piece... still smiling!

With our thoughts we create,
ways to entice,
James xx


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
    lol I name the youngest female, every year, Roxanne, and Rocky for the boy, and of course Mom. Don't care if I'm wrong, that's just who they are that night. lol Yes, of course you need to give them a name. Not, Hey you, that's no respect. lol I believe animals know from our tone in our voices and volume, just who we are. And cats will come when they are called, and they will go lay down on their blanket when told, or stand still to get towelled down cause they are wet. etc. They just have that unique way of giving themselves their time out when they want it by turning their back on you. Something maybe we all should incorporate to end fights before they start. lol

    thxs so much for this great review

    lulube
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your chosen words portray the conversation between the two animals well

good visual

good enjambment through sentences to allow flow

cheers smoothiecool


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
    thxs for coming back, missed you, just a bit. lol great supportive review, thxs smoothie

    lulube

reply by Smoothiecool on 26-Sep-2014
    brief reviews at moment & replies as traveling across Australia from West to Tasmania ..SC ..Faye

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
    ooooooo, watch out in that last place. lol No devils for you. Have a great and safe trip

    lulube

reply by Smoothiecool on 26-Sep-2014
    thanks SC >.Faye
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Hi Lulube :)
Yep, it's easy to read the minds of these cute little critters! I think you got it just right!
Thanks for sharing the photo and the fun :)
Love, Debs x


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    thxs so much for the read and review; I just put some pictures into the computer, I'll send you some, you and the kids will like them. If you want to use any for a poem go ahead. There are only 16 people I send pics. to and not everyone for all of what I take. NO no nudies, lol

    lulube
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Lulube;
I like the way you had the readers believing that the raccoons are having a conversation. He had me believing in it. The picture you have chosen is very cute and we have some of these critters were we live and they are so adorable.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the good Lord will be with you always Lulube.
Alex


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    A little Duck Fun style Alex. Thxs for enjoying it. It's nice to know that the readers are getting something out of my twisted mind., lol
    thxs so much for the review.,
    '
    'Have you had a chance to fool around with that melody yet?
    Just curious.

    lulube

reply by krys123 on 22-Sep-2014
    You will are very funny in you are so welcome.
    Alex

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    `Alex, I actually got that, after a couple of reads. lol

    yo

    lulube

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    `Alex, I actually got that, after a couple of reads. lol

    yo

    lulube
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country ranch writer
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AWE THEY CAN HAVE LOTS OF TREATS MY FRIEND IS HERE TO FEED YOU SO THOSE BULLY BROTHERS OF YOUR CAN'T EAT IT ALL UP AND LEAVE YOU ALL HUNGRY.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    thxs so much for your generous 6 stars. OMG Duck 'Fun scores. lol Glad you had fun with it.
    thxs so much for your review.

    I saw the corrections in that one that we kept going back to. Good job./]
    lulube

reply by country ranch writer on 22-Sep-2014
    THANKS YOU ARE A TOUGH COOKIE LOL

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    No not really, I just wrote a lot about them to you. lol

    lulube

reply by country ranch writer on 22-Sep-2014
    love those little fellas they are so cute and inqusitive
Comment by
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Yay .. Duck Fun!

There is a corner of the garden my kids have named Rac. Café - your fun tale reminded me of this and made me smile!

Too cute, Lori! Loved the pics you sent earlier too.


Keep spreading the smiles, doll. :)

xxx

Sonali


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    Awwwww, I knew you'd like this one,. I was just hoping that you'd see it before the time ran out on it.
    I decided to branch out a bit to try and spread the style a bit. You should try one. Get a picture of a couple of birds in your garden or something and by the look of them come up with their conversation.
    Take a break, that's why I like doing them, they are a break.

    thxs for your review Sonali

    lulube and welcome for the pictures
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I like that your raccoon are paying you a visit again. The baby ones are especially cute. Did you see the video on youtube where a baby raccoon is massaging a kitten's ears. Sooo cute! 8-)


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
    Noooooo I didn't I never go on there. Not sure what to do there and if it's not free I wouldn't anyway. Sounds so cute. How do I do that?

    lulube

reply by boxergirl on 21-Sep-2014
    If you have internet just type in youtube videos.
    then search for raccoon petting a cat. It should come up. It doesnt cost anything. You can even post your on videos on there.

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    I don't have any videos. It's just me and Mosey's not too energetic anymore, he got hit by a car when he was younger and arthritis is getting him in his back legs. Poor guy.

    lulube

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    Oh ya thxs for the info. I THINK

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    SHIT just deleted, ya and thxs for the info, I think I'll try it now while it's on my mind.

    lulube

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
    I went straight to those videos oh, for about 2 hours. Saved a lot of them, they make me mad that I didn't get closer to the little ones when they first came here, now they are too old, but one is gutsier. The one that keeps poking her nose over the balcony brick wall. lol

    thxs so much again

    lulube

reply by boxergirl on 22-Sep-2014
    Welcome!
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rjuselius
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haha. lol. this is such a sweet picture of animal behaviour! it is truly cute. and comfy. nice one, dear friend!
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
    thxs so much for reading this poem. Glad you like it. I wish some people would do a Duck Fun style poem. We all need a good laugh here and there. I'm so glad you like it.
    thxs for the review.

    lulube
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