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Waking To Autumn


a seasonal rhyme

  23 total reviews 
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Another wonderously crafted vision of a season a sentiment and a dream!- Beautiful as are you

So glad I stumbled upon this one-
Would have been a shame to miss it
Write on Di


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2015



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
    Well hi there, stranger. Where you been?
    Thanks!
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Ah, autumn, the season that brings out the blazing colours of imagination, as it softly brushes summer aside...

There is a magical sense of serenity to this poem - I almost can't describe how it makes me feel, but it's very dream-like, and simply gorgeous. Wonderful rhyme, flawless meter and a mastering of poetic language - stunning.


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    Hi!!! And THANK YOU! I pulled this from the archives.

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 28-Sep-2014
    Beautiful!

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    What is that little yellow flag?
    Thanks D

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 28-Sep-2014
    What little yellow flag?

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 28-Sep-2014
    You lost me on this one. LOL. Do you mean the yellow cross? (*grin*)

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
    It was a flag that said "NEW". Now I get it. It was telling me your reply was new. Geeze I'm not awake yet...
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My favorite season also, after a minor emotional adjustment. this is beautifully penned. I especially like the alliteration and complimentary matchng of font and background color to art work.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
    THANK YOU!
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Thank you for sharing these lovely images of your favorite season, along with your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains. I enjoyed your use of alliteration, and the presentation is wonderfully dramatic too. I'm only sorry I don't have a six to award your "refrain". Enjoy fall- Joan


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
    Thank you Joan!
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this is an excellent write, poetic visionary, long time no see, I've missed your beautiful poetic renderings. this has exc3llent imagery presented. I am ready for autumn to make a cool announcement in my neighborhood, lol


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
    thank you so much, Sweets~!
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This is lovely. It has such marvelous rhyme and rhythm. Excellent imagery too, beautifully written. I enjoyed this one very much. Autumn is my favorite season of all.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
    Thanks you Smurphgirl!
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Wow I wish I had six stars to give you Jewell as this is truly beautiful. You have created some glorious images in my mind. Very well done.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
    Hello Wendyanne, Thank you so much.
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Poet Visionary, I love your poem. You described so well the the incoming Autumn. The picture you provided complements the theme. Your rhyme and rhythm to me is great. It flowed freely. The images are sharp and varied. Thanks for sharing. Dom


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
    Thank you Dom. God bless you.

reply by Dom G Robles on 27-Sep-2014
    You are very welcome. Dom
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What beautiful imagery and excellent iambic tetrameter. Wow. Autumn is also my favorite time of year and your descriptions are scrumptious. Too many excellent lines and images to choose a favorite. Too bad it is the end of the week and I am short of sixes.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
    Thanks SO much!
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I reminisce of shortened days,
an evening's glow in golden haze,
Abbreviated, brisk and warm;
Embracing me in welcomed charm.
Fall is my favorite time of year..I love the imagery here
God bless


 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
    thanks
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