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William, where are you?


3yr old boy goes missing.

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OMG, Not another one! So many children are being taken these days, it is frightening and heartbreaking. I dread to think what these little innocents are subjected to before they breathe their last. If I ever found the people who do this, I would happily spend the rest of my life in prison after I had killed the b......d!!! What is happening in our world? What sort of people are we giving birth to? Breaks my heart. Your poem is so heartfelt, Kay, I do hope he is one of the lucky ones and is found soon. I will add him to my prayers. xsx Sandra


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014



reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
    Mummer Seagull, Thanks for reading; still no news re William. The world today is steeped in muck. Love, Kay.
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Sad story for you write around the hope that William will be found alive and well. I hope he is alive and well. We have two cases in Virginia involving 20 year olds. one recently and another a few yew years ago both tied to the same man. The police have him in custody, but haven't found the most recent alive or her body.


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Are you still here? It is sad and makes us angry that a little boy could be taken from grandma's back yard. Prayer is the only thing we can do. These mongrels that do these things to children, when caught, should be castrated! Love, K.XX
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Kace, my dear friend,

Your work has so brilliantly and poignantly portrayed the unbelievable and the incredible heartache we all feel when a small helpless child disappears. We all feel so powerless to the horrendous tragedies which unfold before us each and every day.. Please keep me updated.. you fan and friend.. Jimi


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    Good morning Jiminy Cricket, This child is on my mind constantly, he is such a sweetheart. I hope he is with our Father and safe - hate to think of him being abused. Australia waits for some news, poor family needs closure. He went missing on the 12th Sept - Police have no leads or evidence. Thank you darling girl, your love is much appreciated...Kanga! My new name that fans call me. LOL ;-)XX
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This is a poignant plea for this child and please know I have put him and his family in prayers. I have lost a child, by the grace of God not this way, so I know full well the pain and fear those that love him are feeling right now.

I pray he is found, unhurt and unscathed and I am ever hopeful the spawn of hell that has taken this baby is caught and suffers unending pain for his misdeed.

Thank you for sharing and encouraging prayer for this family and child. AT=/


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    Bless you AT - no one can know unless, like you, they have lost a child. He was snatched on 12th Sept. Police have no clues and the family must be so distraught. Thank you for prayers. Like you, I hope the animal that took him burns in hell. Blessings, K. XX

reply by Acquired Taste on 29-Sep-2014
    I only would ask that you let us know when he is found. Blessings for keeping this in the public eye. If you need member cent pumps to keep it current I'd be happy to supply some. Regards, Jean

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Jean, Your offer is so kind; no one has any idea what happened and if and where he is. He was taken on 12th Sept and police have no clues - he seems to have vanished! Most children snatched are either dead or never found, unfortunately. Bless you my friend. Regards, Kay.XX
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Kaye, this is a very touching piece of work. I wonder if you personally know William or if he has been on the News.

There is so much fear involved when a child is missing. Nice poem and beautiful photo art. Carole


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    Carole, Thanks for dropping in; no, don't know William - been on the news. He was snatched on 12th Sept. Blessings friend XX Kay.
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A poem for a lost child. I like this poem. It is touching and moving. The expression of looking for the lost child is very much expressed prettily. Short but full of meaning and imagery. Congratulations. Dom


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    Hello Dom, Thanks for dropping in; snatched on 12th September and Australia waits for news. Blessings, Kay XX
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We can't find you little man
Praying that wherever you are
God holds you in His hand
Pray for William - gone far.
Poor little boy oh I pray for him too..this is a parents worst night mare
God bless


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    Hello my dear friend, Thanks for dropping in; taken on 12th Sept. doesn't look good as time goes on. Police have no evidence. Bless you girl XX Kay.
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Aussie: I want to vomit every time I hear about some sick b______ snatching a child to use and abuse, then, frequently murder. Hopefully, and by God's grace, this precious innocent one will be found unscathed. A lovely write about this event. livelylinda


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    Thanks for reading new friend. They should be castrated if caught. Generally, the children are murdered or kept as sex slaves. I think he is with god. Blessings, Kay XX
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Hi Aussie,

What a great dedication and prayer for William. I do hope he is found safely.

I just don't understand the taking of children, abusing, and killing.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    Thanks for dropping in Jax. Australia waits for news and some closure for the grieving parents. Parents worst nightmare. Bless you, Kay XX
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Good rhythm and rhyme telling of the loss of a little treasure. may God take charge of the situation and return him to his family. Awesome presentation for the theme


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
    God knows where William is - I pray he is in the arms of our Father, safe. He was taken 12th Sept. Thank you for reading my new friend. Blessings, Kay XX
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