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Rating of Chapter 22 - This Face
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I hate it sooooooo much that we only get sis of the six stars. We should get a few ten stars for the poems that deserve such. This poem, this poem, this poem, ooooooooooohhhhhh my dear Mentor,Sir.
My heart aches as I read this heartbreaking tale of an abused child. My heart feels so hurt at this knowledge. You are so strong and so admired and loved, my dear. My agape love is full for you and that pain, no child ever deserved or deserves. This poem starts off from the very beginning with a BOOM and it keeps on going. At first I was writing down lines and stanzas to mark as the greatest. I would've re-copied this whole poem so it is unnecessary to choose any of it. It is all soooooo magnificent and fabulous, striking as it grabs the heart and keeps hold of it in a twisting way. I will never, ever forget this poem and I want to own it. Please tell my immediately when you finally publish these masterpieces.
You are so brilliantly a genius - sweet soul.....You are MARVELOUS!
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2017 |
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2017
Thank you dear T, so loved your words here, for we share much in different ways. thank you so much.
Wishing you a lovely weekend, and thanks for going back to this.
RG
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Rating of Chapter 27 - Rain
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| Hi, RGstar. I was nosing around in your 'stuff' and found this. It's so-o-o beautiful. Really magnificent. I read it three times, now, and it just gets better and better. What images and moods you conjure up for your readers. Lucky me, to have found this; I'm going to bookcase it, so I can read it many times. You have so much talent -- Margaret
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Comment Written 28-May-2017 |
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reply by the author on 30-May-2017
Ha,ha. Oh, Margaret, of all my poems, you find my favorite, along with ''falling Leaves''
I love rain, and sometime listen as if I did not write it. Reminds a little of own Mother who passed away from Cancer.
Thank you.
My best wishes.
RG
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Rating of Chapter 22 - This Face
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This is a 5.9-star poem. I am not the 'last word' in grammar by any means, but we have a lot of English teachers and professors on this site who could tell you for sure. I think when you use
either, you use or, you use neither (which you have) you use 'nor'.
If I'm wrong I'd be o so happy to correct my review.
GoodHearted Woman
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2017 |
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
You are quite correct, that is the rule that I follow closely, but with poetry, nor is often used without neither, rathe the old colloquial or better said, Elizabethan aspect of it, so good for poetry, but not for essay writing.
Thank you so much for somehow finding this...remarkable how you did for it holds me nearer than most as actual for good reason.
My best wishes, and thank you.
RGstar
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reply by GoodHearted Woman on 01-Apr-2017
There is no place to change that I can see. GHW
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reply by Anonymous Member on 14-Apr-2017
There is no place to change that I can see. GHW
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Rating of Chapter 16 - Oh, Wild Forest, Wild
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Well, I'm speechless. The first stanza, especially, feels like my childhood come to life. I loved the idea of magic in the forest - and I did have a very wild forest to walk in - and I dreamed hard of meeting elves and fairies there.
I love how you bring music into so many of your poems. But the words are musical too - the swish of fox's tail, eagle flying the moon, the sandman with pockets full of jade. Each image feels tangible.
I love this. I know I can learn a lot from reading your work, I'm glad to finally explore your portfolio.
Carol
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2016 |
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
Thank you so much.Ha,ha. I am so pleased you enjoy the poems there.
Yes, this was my first poem of the month, not long after joining.
I have never edited them, I shall be re-writing areas of the book and adding new poems so good enough for publication.
Best wishes,
RG
Thank you so much.
Have a great day.
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