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Comment by | I work to survive, | | but I write to live. | | Author Rating For Short Works      | Script Rating      | Review Stars  | | |
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Comment by | Premier Author | | Premier Reader | | Poet Rating      | Author Rating For Short Works      | Author Rating For Novels      | Review Stars   Rank: 107 | | |
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stunning presentation of your poem
good steady use of iambic meter makes for strong cadence when read aloud and good use of enjambment lets story flow from line to line
solid use of rhyming couplets
good alliteration in phrases like spews his sermons
great contrast between the ominous, lurking, tempting demon and God, especially in those final lines
Brooke
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2014 |
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Comment by | Premier Author | | Premier Reader | | Poet Rating      | Author Rating For Short Works      | Author Rating For Novels      | Review Stars    Rank: 505 | | |
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Apparently Domino2 Ray, has nightmares, I have hardly any dreams, I think I've explained on my page, I see things in the things around, we're all different. But it looks like you were shown the inevitable covering (I hope) beautifully written, in aabb rhyming, metronomic cadence, well done, Dean, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2014 |
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
Thanks so much for your fabulous rating and review, my friend. So sorry for the delayed reply! ~Dean
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