Your selection of pouring rain adds much to your poem of hope, amidst Satan's temptations of life's riches and pleasures. Excellent word choice is creatively expressed within this poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
Thanks, pattipac, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the entire presentation. I truly appreciate your good luck well wishes, supportive comments and very thoughtful review. Thank you as well for the exceptional rating. All are very much appreciated. :) ~Dean
Wow... that was incredible. A little difficult to read... but then peaking between my fingers so that I didn't see anything that would give me nightmares might have been the reason for that. :) I never know what to expect with your poetry but curiosity usually gets me... and I'm so glad it does. As usual, I thought it was great. A beautiful story that had a perfect rhythm. Very well done!
By the way, just what did eat before you went to bed Saturday night? I want some!!
this is an outstanding piece of poetic art dear dean! the presentation is awesome! i can really hear satan call and promise all the things with adding greed into list of sins.
thank you for sharing!
Saved this 6 radiant stars for this "dark" poem. I guess, it told the story at the back of my mind? hahaha I'm not taking any meds these past few days, so I better talk to my endocrinologist to give me something that will calm my nerves or is there some pills for hatred? Hah!
I better be reading more inspirational poems, dear. hahaha On the contrary, this one made me realize what I will get after this hatred. Forgive me O' Lord!