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Reign Knee Daze (Rainy Days)


A poem, just for the hell of it...

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pattipac
 
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Your selection of pouring rain adds much to your poem of hope, amidst Satan's temptations of life's riches and pleasures. Excellent word choice is creatively expressed within this poem. Good luck!


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Thanks, pattipac, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the entire presentation. I truly appreciate your good luck well wishes, supportive comments and very thoughtful review. Thank you as well for the exceptional rating. All are very much appreciated. :) ~Dean
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Sir, whatever you are on, I need some of that genius. I am in total awe. A tempestuous journey, but oh the relief to realise, you always have a choice.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2014


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Always know from which direction redemption falls (like the rain)... Good work, Dean! Kind of a Scrooge meets Satan thing going on here!

One little nit-picky point...

Yet, you deny yourself these treasures,

and toss away such splendid pleasures."

I'd consider switching the treasures/pleasures because pleasure is an intangible feeling inside. Treasure is a much more concrete thing...

In my reasoning (such that it is...) it makes better sense to deny oneself pleasure... and toss away the THINGS that cause that emotion... the treasure.

(Works either way... just like to feel I've given some helpful bit of insight... LOL!)

Cheers!
Christina


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
    Thanks so much, Christina, and I agree. I appreciate your comments and excellent suggestion. :}

    ~Dean
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Wow... that was incredible. A little difficult to read... but then peaking between my fingers so that I didn't see anything that would give me nightmares might have been the reason for that. :) I never know what to expect with your poetry but curiosity usually gets me... and I'm so glad it does. As usual, I thought it was great. A beautiful story that had a perfect rhythm. Very well done!

By the way, just what did eat before you went to bed Saturday night? I want some!!


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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njn66
 
 
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excellence. I love how it flows and rhythms. I love the pictu4res it makes the poem more real and just sets it in time to the words.I just love everything about it keep up the good work.


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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this is an outstanding piece of poetic art dear dean! the presentation is awesome! i can really hear satan call and promise all the things with adding greed into list of sins.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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daeneam
 
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Saved this 6 radiant stars for this "dark" poem. I guess, it told the story at the back of my mind? hahaha I'm not taking any meds these past few days, so I better talk to my endocrinologist to give me something that will calm my nerves or is there some pills for hatred? Hah!

I better be reading more inspirational poems, dear. hahaha On the contrary, this one made me realize what I will get after this hatred. Forgive me O' Lord!

c", Mae


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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You must have had quite a night with a dream like that. Horror, thriller and yet the cleansing rain.
Great pictures, rhyme and alliteration to propel us through this amazing piece. Well done.

Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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walking in on this piece dear pal strolling down reading dressed in darkness as always dean very beautifully crafted excellent pen dear friend


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
    Thanks so much for your outstanding review and excellent feedback, Oh Dark One.

    I appreciate it very much, Liam. :}
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billscott
 
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This. Is. One. Of. Your. Ultimate. Best.

Wow....Wow

Absolutely delicious and bitter all at once.

Awesome Dean, truly awesome!


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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