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Reign Knee Daze (Rainy Days)


A poem, just for the hell of it...

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Humor and horror. Well presented, Dean. Though long it held its grace. Good rhymes and lyrically sound. A few little grammar dots, but nothing I would care to mention that you do not already know, at least not enough to to detract from the work.
Your usual visuals well inserted. A lot of work gone into this.
Another good write.
Best wishes,
RGstar


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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Dear Dean, here you are scaring me half to death when I just crawled away from it. Ok my friend once more you prove your imagery almost drips with fear and screams on its own. Such impact, but goodness if I have nightmares I'm coming after you! OMG those picture/vids like wow, let me hide under the covers.
Great king of screams I see is still in fine form.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
    Maureen! Is it really you!? How wonderful you are to take the time to read and review this for me. Praise be, how I've missed you around here, dear poet! I'm so glad you are getting stronger, and I know you will recover with the spirit of the celtic Warrior we all know you to be.

    God bless you, my dear friend, and welcome back!

    Respectfully,

    Dean
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It's very comforting to know that others have dreams as crazy and bizarre as my own! I loved this from start to finish, not knowing what to expect along the way. Loved the "motion artwork". Very creepy but reassuring at the end. Excellent piece which was very much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing and hope your dreams continue to inspire you!


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
    Thanks so much for the excellent feedback, butterfly4265. It's much appreciated. :}
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Wow, what a tour-de-force there, Dean. Great rhymes that not only speak of the temptation of Satan, but also make such accute observations of the human condition. A really good poem. And always excellent presentation with your videos to enhance the poem.


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
    Thanks a bunch for your excellent feedback, sibhus. As always, I sincerely appreciate it. :}
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Jeepers creepers! This is amazing in form and construction. Medications can certainly influence dream patterns, but when it inspires such a write maybe increasing the dosage is the better way to go LOL. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
    Thank you for reading it, Monica. Much appreciated. :}
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God is amazing! Rain on the hope and joy of the Lord! Great photos and rain. God deserves the awards on this. Great message for the nations and leaders. I like the gave you all, no, lies. Jesus gives us gifts. You wrote this very well! God bless! <>< Soli deo Gloria!
flylikeaneagle


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
    Thanks, flylikeaneagle. I'm so happy you enjoyed my meager offering, an attempt at telling stories in rhyme.

    Much appreciated. :}
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This poem is well rhymed and metered. It has many apt illunstrations. It shows how faith can keep you from falling in the evil. It washes away doubt and fear.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
    Thanks, dragonpoet. I'll will...

reply by dragonpoet on 12-Nov-2014
    No problem.

    dragonpoet
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All I can say is what a gift you have.

If this is what your unconscious mind unleashes when you sleep, then buddy I would definitely not ask for new meds! The ones you're on are working just fine.

Extraordinary Poem! Loved the artwork!

Note: Not used to getting sound effects with a post, so initially thought my computer was being fried! Scared the hell out of me ... appropriate response, I think, considering, the 'theme' of this poem. :=)

Marisa


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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This is a beautiful poem I must say. You have described your dream in a vivid manner and the images used are very appropriate. I liked the lyrical cadence of the poem.


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014


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That must've been some dream you had. I love the sound of the cleansing rain you've incorporated into this poem. Interesting concept to be able to know who's sold their soul to the devil.

Am curious; is the ghoul in the fourth animated photo churning butter?? I won't even mention what else came to mind.


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014



reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
    Uh, I'm not too sure what he's doing, GLG, but I thought the same thing when I first saw it. So, my safest answer to you would be, "Why yes, Green lake Girl...he's churning the butter of bitterness." LOL...

    Thanks for your comments.

reply by Green Lake Girl on 12-Nov-2014
    The butter of bitterness. Love it!
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