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| Dean, are you sure you weren't at my family's last year's Thanksgiving Day dinner? Those faces look awfully familiar, like looking in a mirror. An impressive poem that tells quite a story. You are very good, my friend (fiend).
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2014 |
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
I may have been, Vic, however, I can't recall, lot a lot of other things that go on in my head, LOL.
Thanks for the review.
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reply by victor 66 on 12-Nov-2014
I would suggest having your head examined, but about that time they'd find some unexplained anomaly that would just create further issues. So, take care of that head, there's a lot of good stuff in there.
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| This is great, and I've got to use a six! This reminds me of some of the Nathaniel Hawthorne stories like "Young Goodman Brown," who discovers so many are possessed by the devil and then he sees evil faces everywhere. The young man in your poem undergoes a lot of temptation. He's taken for quite a ride, and the Devil promises him everything. Even though he doesn't give in--the thought and temptation are always with him. Excellent AABB rhyme, and wonderful job of creating atmosphere. judi
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| This is yet another comprehensive poem that the author has created with this piece of work. This is macabre and interesting. This is frightening. Well done yet again.
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Comment byNovelist of the Year!
For Six Years!
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Sometimes I sense that he's still near,
lurking, preying upon my fear.
And when that happens, without fail,
God sends the rain, His soothing veil...
what a poem!! You never cease to amaze me, Dean, with your vivid imagination -- enough to give one nightmares.
Margaret
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2014 |
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| Another exceptional piece. It just goes to show you that no matter how much you are promised in this life, you have to remain vigilant and loyal to Heaven. The afterlife is the icing on the cake and you'll never get there if you follow a dark path.
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