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| this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job portraying the way the devil tempts us while we are at our weakest and lures us with the sin we have the most difficulty turning away.
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Dean;
and possibly seven stars it's a right roundabout number.
Exceptionally well-written composition, superb tempo and meter, intense imagination that is demonstratively descriptive and expressive, marvelous story within a poem, tasty metaphorical phrase in simile type statements and most of all extremely and fascinatingly entertaining.
And besides the pictures that represent and complement your poem these are just but a few of probably many more I could complement your poem from what I've obtained from reading it.
Superb rhyming which was neither forced nor labored and helped with your rhythmic flow which flowed so intricately well throughout your writing.
I could begin to write down passages of your extremely imaginative, descriptive and expressive imagery but I think you basically know what you have written and understand what I mean: "and when that happens without fail, God sends the rain His soothing veil." This pretty much is summing up part of your poem an excellent ending to such a great writing.
Thank you for sharing and posting this being for everyone to read and when he got his start being recognized in the majority of the public eyes and be published in magazines like the New Yorker or some other well-known the affiliate.
This is best way I can explain you in your writing:
"you having manifested the knowledge, skill and experience needed for success in a particular field or endeavor such as poetry, is an asset to everyone.
Thank you for sharing and posting this my friend and may the Lord keep and bless you always.
Alex
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Wow Dean! What more to say. At first by the title I thought it would be about the pain in the knees from the weather:) I sure was wrong!
This had my hackles up right away. I think you described exactly how the devil must work.
Great piece of work. Keep taking those meds - lol!
Teresa
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2014 |
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