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A rogue poem of sorts

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Jacqueline M Franklin
 
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Hi, Marillion,

Wow, what a rogue indeed! You have to watch out for those fella's who only see the gray areas. Truth and commitment are not their forte!

Excellent write.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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Ben Colder
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The last of a quick introduction. Oh well. What a stanza!


I never meant to break your heart,
Or rip your bridal dreams apart,
But you have sight in black and white,
And I in only gray.

Shalom my friend.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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Irish Rain
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Well this is just wonderful. So reminds me of my son, engaged three times...and still single. He loved them all so...in his gray way, ha ha. BUT...better that than married and making some poor girl miserable...I admire your talent here!


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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victor 66
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This was a very easy read. I liked the rhyming and the flow your poem had. I believe getting your heart broke or getting your feelings hurt, are self inflicted wounds. Relationships, like many experiences, is about learning. Best wishes.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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another taunting missive sent
from the man who claims his sword
thrusts and parries by assent
of a naive and willing horde

of hopeful, pinning young ladies
who think he'll still be there tomorrow,
not slinking back to Hades
(that place of counted sorrows)

where he will scheme and plot
another night of seduction,
another evening fraught
with innuendo and titillation.

;-)


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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Drew Delaney
 
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Wow! This really turned out exceptional I would say. I love the final two lines. They are totally brilliant. Great job while being in the gray of thoughts.
Drew Delaney


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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It's fabulous, beautifully read aloud. A loner's drifting. Also, the bittersweet acceptance of recognition. Marillion, it's often the ideas that suddenly arrive that are so very grand.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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AAbBC. An amputee limerick. Novel. Interesting. Nobody wants long entanglements any more...but they still love to
gripe and whine. Excellent.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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I came on tonight to do a few reviews, earn some dollars and put on my own work. but second read of the night is yours, and it led me to a wonderful distraction, really well written, and thank you and...now where was I?


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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Ah, very well-worded! Very cleverly constructed. "But bless your hearts for all the darts...You've aimed and launched my way." Classic!

I see zero flaws.

Peace!


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014


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