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The Different Faces Of Love


Love has many faces, even those unseen

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Comment by
Lena Borghi
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Rating of Chapter 28 -
'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
You have another gem here, RG, this is a beautiful, visceral write with so much emotion. Excellent sequel to "Rain" that finds redemption in its hopeful last stanza.

Again, beautifully rhymed couplets, and strong visual imagery with good use of poetic devices and well chosen words. Use of strong verbs helps convey intended tone. I could go on.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us and for your heartfelt notes. I have read your work here and there but hope to read more. I would like to read this book to get a better sense of your message.

Well, well done. Keep writing.

All my best to you,

Lena


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you so much, Lena, for a super review. How nice it is to have this support as it is so nice to have a new name at its side.
    A lovely review. Thank you so much.
    The book will go into the next stage, I hope it to be to your liking when it eventually is available. keep in touch and I will send a copy. :)
    Thank you.
    RGstar
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Rating of Chapter 27 -
Rain
This is the first audio poem I have reviewed, and must say I am beyond impressed. This brought tears to my eyes. My mother died in 2006 and I still feel the emotion of her passing whenever I think about it. Congratulations on your win, I hope to be able to go back and ready your other poems and see what gems I have missed.


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you. So nice to hear a new voice and see a new face in conjunction with my work.
    My best to you.
    Have a great day.
    RGstar
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seaglass
 
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Rating of Chapter 28 -
'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
This is beautiful and heart rendering as all the others. So many people are presently in this state of desperation and many others have been there. The human spirit is strong to survived life for as long as it does. Never giving up is the very essence of living.


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you s much. Happy you could relate to this last episode.
    Thank you for the sixth star.
    My best wishes to you and family.
    Best wishes,
    RGsytar
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Rating of Chapter 28 -
'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
It was a very beautiful and expressive poem. Great visuals. I love the metaphoric image of the rain. It flowed very well and certainlt thought-provoking. Excellent image of a child.


I enjoyed the read.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you, yeltel. I appreciate your support.
    Best wishes,
    RGstar
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Dean Kuch
 
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Rating of Chapter 28 -
'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
Well, you've got me crying here, Roy, my friend, and I don't cry all that often. Probably not as much as I should, really.

It was a number of things that evoked such emotion for me personally. The frequent references to feeling lost and alone, without one of the people you love more than anyone else in the world, your mother -- (and rightly so) to talk to or confide in. And, like Annie Wilkes of Stephen Kings "MISERY" fame told author Paul Sheldon in the story, "It's the rain that makes me feel the way I do. Sometimes, it just gives me the blues"

Beautifully done, heartwarming and terrible sad, simultaneously. A paradox of poetry, if you will.

Excellent work, Roy~ Dean


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Yes, we cry, Dean, for it takes those emotions to incorporate a good heart and create emotions for others that we would have within.

    Thank you very much.
    Have a great day.
    Rgstar

reply by Dean Kuch on 12-Dec-2014
    You do the same, my friend. Excellent work...
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Pili Pubul
 
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Rating of Chapter 28 -
'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
Wish I had a six..another astounding moving poem
expressing with great depth the pain he still endure .
Great style, imagery and emotion. Pili


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    I got your six, Pili. It is in your words.
    My best wishes, my friend.
    Have a great day.
    RG

reply by Pili Pubul on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you my friend, big smiles. Pili
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have no more stars to give. Just like your poem touched me from my head to my toes
I give you a big YES
This is a very emotional poem to read.
It's sad yet so beautiful to read,
Thank you very much for sharing.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you misscookie :)
    Hope all is well on the southern front.
    My best wishes,
    have a nice day.
    RG

reply by misscookie on 12-Dec-2014
    Praise God all is well I had to stomp the devil out of my way today. LOL
    Take care until next time.
    Cookie
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Quoiky
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Rating of Chapter 28 -
'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
This was a beautiful poem. I couldn't help thinking of my own mother. Your voice helps with the strength of the poem, and I love the sound of the rain in the background. Thank you.


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the pretty stars :) Nice to see a new name in support.
    My best wishes,
    RGstar
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Lena Borghi
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Rating of Chapter 27 -
Rain
RG,

This is exquisite! Your lines had me chilled and then in tears. What sweetness in the voices! What beautiful flow and heartfelt sentiment.

The couplet rhymes are flawless. Great impact in these lines. The last two stanzas are so emotional. What a beautiful piece, so well enhanced by the audio.

Congratulations on superb work!

Best wishes,
Lena


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Oh, Lena, thank you so much. These are the reasons we write. We aim for the emotions we ourselves feel and that which we can give to others. There can be no higher honor from you.
    I thank you.
    Thank you for the sixth star.
    Have a wonderful day.
    RG

reply by Lena Borghi on 12-Dec-2014
    You are quite welcome, my friend.

    Best wishes to you.

    Lena
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Drew Delaney
 
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Rating of Chapter 28 -
'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
I really like this, RG. It's another feather in your cap, so to speak. I cannot think of anything to say about the writing to improve. It is very good and very spot on. Best wishes to you, dear friend. Drew


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you so much my friend. Drew, always nice to see your name in conjunction with my work.
    Hope all is well.
    My best wishes,
    RG
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