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The Different Faces Of Love


Love has many faces, even those unseen

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'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
Hi!

So very nicely written and spoken! I'm a professional songwriter/musician and I enjoyed the musical bed for this wonderful spoken poem. I am a member of the sister site, FanMusic.

My mother died this past February at 90 years of age. I can relate to this poem in many ways. Our mothers are the ones to whom we always turn for guidance and comfort. Our fathers may teach us a trade and tell us how to be a man. But they usually do not have the means by which to touch our hearts and souls as do our mothers.

Wonderfully done in every way! Wishing you well and a fabulous Christmas ...

Alan


 Comment Written 13-Dec-2014



reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014
    Thank you so much for your support. I will have to look up your work in the near future.
    My condolences for mum, yet I hope there was some solace in my poem.
    Best wishes,
    RGstar

reply by ProSongwriter on 13-Dec-2014
    You are very welcome! And yes, your poem was a joy to read. I have fond memories of my mother and anything that brings her to the forefront of my thoughts is a good thing.

    Wishing you the very best ...

    Alan
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Exceptional....always. Hey RG...-smile- Man I'll tell you ..you don't make it...something wrong out there. The mix of your gifts can rock a child to sleep....and compel a man to weep. Bravo Bro...out of gold sorry big love michael


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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014
    Thank you, my good friend. Your comments always magical, even when short.
    Bravo.
    Thank you so much Michael.
    Rg

reply by reconciled on 13-Dec-2014
    you the man dude....remember me...-wink-

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014
    Ha,ha. You the man, Michael, you the man.
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You really didn't need author notes for this one. The poem really explains itself beautifully. [Mother, I cry like the slaughter of sheep] favorite line, beautifully crafted] And [gnashing of teeth I've seen in many poems on here...a very popular line from the Bible: I never tire of hearing it, though] This is another well written, well worded, and thought provoking poem. Blessing my dear.


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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014
    The author's note was more in recognition of all, not really the poem.
    Hope you are fine with life.
    Thank you so much for the sixth star.
    My best wishes,
    RGstar
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This poem is well arranged and glides with ease. It made me look for my unbrimella . Wish I would have read this when I had six to give. I can only give 5 and say well done.


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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014
    Thank you, Ben. Hope all is well.
    Have a great Christmas.
    Best wishes,
    RGstar
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What to do next? The notion of a muse-ideas from within-
works for many, who listen for the small still voice. Your attention to detail is impressive.


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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014
    Thank you, so much.
    I think we will just have to wait and see. Not an easy time at the moment.
    Please have a great day.
    Best wishes,
    RGstar
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'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
Hi Roy,
my brother, you know what I already have to say, because you know of my admiration of your art and the whole-hearted effort you inject into every line to make it sing in an echoed refrain... you image conjures the vision of despair, your words--reflect the mind-games of the questioning to our prolonged pained existence... yet through the faith of a love for a mother and that to her son, life offers up hope.

A perfect partner to 'Rain' part one, and another magic collaboration of words and music... soar my brother!

With our thoughts we create,
stories of the heart,
James.


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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2014
    Thank you, my friend. Where it goes from here, I am not sure, as none of us know what the future holds
    Merry Christmas to you and family, my brother.
    Thanks for the sixth star.
    RG
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An Excellent Poem even without hearing any music (wasn't sure if music was going to play - it didn't). The author's words are strong, creative and thought provoking. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and reflects the theme of this poem well.


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you. My best wishes,
    Have a great day. Sorry you couldn't hear the audio.
    RGstar
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'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
RG,

Atmosphere is full of vivid and delightful descriptions. Arrangement is perfect.
Created impressions through the descriptions are vivid, forceful and making the reader think about it. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you. Nice to see your name here.
    Thank you for the sixth star.
    My best to you.
    Have a great day.
    RGstar
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The way you have recorded and I have listened with bated breath .A well written and the words are beautifulm still listening I 'm still listening. I love it. Mary


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you, Mary. What joy you bring. Thank you so much.
    My best wishes,
    RGstar
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'Heaven Can Wait' (Rain, part two)
Dear RG - As always your work offers a powerful and deep message to all those willing to ponder its depths. This aches, bleeds on its own, yet too there is a sense of faith, to look for the light of hope even within ourselves. Exceptional work - you always move me deeply with your poems. Much of my own journey in this life has been challenges after challenges, and yet I see each as a type of strengthening of my inner core, the essence of all I am comes from all I have walked through.
Beautiful work my friend.
Thanks for sharing, and happy holidays.
Maurreen


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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
    Thank you so much. Maureen. So good to see you able and willing. You of all should know of the grief and anguish such scenarios depict.
    The joy of seeing you write these words are indescribable. Thank you so much for the effort. Thoughts always with you though a scent.
    Best wishes,
    RG
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