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Goodness me. that is a scary one. Made more scary because it is possible. Can you imagine waking up and seeing you kids dead then finding out you did it? That is a monsterI would hate to come up against. Excellent writing and a fabulous contest entry. Good luck!
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Bravo! This is terrrific. Better than a certain other one, which I thought was very good, it a bit too much at the end. This one should win. But then I say that a lot and find that others aren't as smart as I am. LOL! Well, good luck. See you on the other side. :)
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G'day Anon. Wow mate that was quite a harrowing story told from the point of view of the Devil's Advocate. It's a really good entry and I wish you luck. Very enjoyable, cheers Fez
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2015 |
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