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The Devil's Advocates


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This is such an understated terror. That adds to the chilling effect. The monster here is smooth and virtually unnoticed. But what horror he has triggered. A unique approach and I would say a winning one.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


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Goodness me. that is a scary one. Made more scary because it is possible. Can you imagine waking up and seeing you kids dead then finding out you did it? That is a monsterI would hate to come up against. Excellent writing and a fabulous contest entry. Good luck!


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


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I really liked this.
I especially liked the restrained tone which makes the tale even more chilling , coupled with the matter of fact nature of the protagonist in the telling.

An excellent contender.
Good luck with it.
G


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


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Bravo! This is terrrific. Better than a certain other one, which I thought was very good, it a bit too much at the end. This one should win. But then I say that a lot and find that others aren't as smart as I am. LOL! Well, good luck. See you on the other side. :)

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


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This is fabulous - Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil - dueling spirits, one on each shoulder. This is extremely creative and horrific. You have taken it to a particularly sinister level.

One wonders if this is what actually transpires during these times of depravity. Very good wishes in this contest. AT=/


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2015


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G'day Anon. Wow mate that was quite a harrowing story told from the point of view of the Devil's Advocate. It's a really good entry and I wish you luck. Very enjoyable, cheers Fez

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2015


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