Surprise Me This is a flash fiction contest. Write a story that has a surprise ending. Since it is flash, the word count must be between 200 and 600 words. The ending can be funny, sad, shocking, etc. But the reader has to be surprised.
This is such an understated terror. That adds to the chilling effect. The monster here is smooth and virtually unnoticed. But what horror he has triggered. A unique approach and I would say a winning one.
Goodness me. that is a scary one. Made more scary because it is possible. Can you imagine waking up and seeing you kids dead then finding out you did it? That is a monsterI would hate to come up against. Excellent writing and a fabulous contest entry. Good luck!
Bravo! This is terrrific. Better than a certain other one, which I thought was very good, it a bit too much at the end. This one should win. But then I say that a lot and find that others aren't as smart as I am. LOL! Well, good luck. See you on the other side. :)
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