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Air Crash


A fatal flight.

  2 total reviews 
Comment by
CheyenneT91
 
 
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Oh man, when he found the cockpit door locked, I knew exactly what the pilot had planned. If it had been a film, there would be people in the crowd gasping.

I used to fly somewhat frequently and being in a plane crash could easily rate as one of my all time deepest fears. Scary stuff.

Great short.


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2015



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your comments.

    My story slightly resembles one of those sci-fi stories where the crew of the spaceship have a battle with each other that is far greater than any battle with aliens.
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I know you say this is fiction, but it read like the news of today about the German plane crash taking 156 souls. I would hope that this will not offend someone who may have lost a family member or friend on the fatal flight., Patricis


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2015



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your comments.
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