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All rhymes, but different flavors of rhyme

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I missed this one by looking at it I was on vacation when it was posted... Anywway as always wonderful form meter and everything I was looking back through this entire book I did not miss many! Congrads on the seal! David- You are the reason I am here the tracher of many and the true heart of poetry I long to be more like!
hugs-Diana


 Comment Written 04-Feb-2006


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I'm glad because I like praising your work!
I'm also glad I didn't remove you from my fan list when you declared you were going to leave.
Another wonderful piece!
I just love your descriptions!


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2005


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Hey I really liked this poem. Some very very pretty images here and all tied together so elegantly. A pleasure to read.

Cheers.
John


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2005


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Now here's one that I had to read three times to feel like I had a handle on the subtle meanings and shadings. Hell of a good job.

Norbanus


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2005


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Hello Marillion,

That poem gave me the shivers. I've seen it and I
know just what you mean. I think the California
sky is so beautiful.

Loved every word but this really stood out:

.."A half-dramatic documentary
Portrays the wishes, luck, and lights of love;
A whole collection, mixed and hung for me "

Beautiful!

Gayle



 Comment Written 09-Oct-2005


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Works like yours don't need to be promoted to be appreciated. Thank you for sharing your incredible talent with those of us less talented.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2005


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Marvelous!

Once again you pull the reader into the moment, guiding our eyes to see the vista of enchantment you so effortlessly create. You make excellent word choices, awakening the senses with specific details: resin sweetness from pine; night wind, light but brusque; the stars, unstrung like silver beads.

I love nature, but am not inclined to get out in it much. A sonnet like this kindles strong interest to be in that moment in more than a vicarious way. Excellent work!

--PW


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2005


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LMFAO, Oh that is great. I give it a week and you'll be promoting them again...lol You can't help yourself, the praise is in your blood. Still LMFAO. Oh god, I needed this laugh tonight. You already know my thoughts on this beautiful work of art. Departing this review with a smile. Hugs, JL


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2005


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OH nothing like having your own meadow surrrounded by pine trees especailly in North Carolina, nothing else can clear your senses quite the same. Hollywood will never compare to the simplicity of a pine thicket on a clear fall night all lit up by a blanket of stars. God's HollyWood. I see we seek solace and cleansing in the same surroundings.


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2005


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Flaky never: typical poet :O)

This was simply beautiful David! I love the magic of the night and the inspiration and serenity it brings out of the soul as it does through your portayal of the perfect night. A wonderful write!

Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2005


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