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A 4 Line Poem Contest Entry in 1, 5, 5, 9 syllable
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Comment by
Michael Ludwinder
 
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Wow. I thought the most powerful line was the "x marks the spot" line. Very powerful. This is a story we all know about but you told it in a unique way. What a strong poem.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your review.
    On reflextion 'x marks the spot' sort of sums up the life of Christ. His ending was marked from the beginning, like the end of a stage drama is known from the beginning, by the actors at least.
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stephybs
 
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This is the time of year we all think of the real meaning of Easter and what it means. Your words are clever and hash. But then that's the way it was. Excellent! Stephanie


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comments.
    After the first draft I altered some words to make them sharper.
    Of course, the drama of Easter we can only ponder.
    Probably it would be too horrific for people today to observe.
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