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Mary Wept


Jesus soothing His mothers pain...

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A fine acrostic about tragic grief felt by a Mother for her son and your words are of course appropriate for the Easter celebration. Congratulations on your win too, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Hello Dolly,

    Thank you for your review, I appreciate it. Happy Easter and stay safe...Bill
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This is beautiful. Congratulations on winning the contest. It shows the great love Christ had for his Mother as well as for all of us.
The addition of rhymed lines adds to the power of this acrostic.
Happy Easter.
Nancy






 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Hello Nancy,

    Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Happy Easter and stay safe...Bill
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Thank you for this lovely poem. It must have been torture for her as a mother. She knew for it was why she became pregnant not by man. It was God's plan. We are very fortunate.
Drew


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Hello Drew,

    Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Happy Easter and stay safe...Bill
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Thank you for sharing your timely acrostic for the Easter season. I admired your rhymed quatrains and parallel artwork selection. Congratulations on having your poem be so well received in the contest. Have a peaceful holiday weekend- Joan


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Hello Joan,

    Thank you for your kind review, I appreciate it. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

    Happy Easter and stay safe from the virus...Bill
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I can't imagine watching your son do that kind of sacrifice for everyone. As a parent you want to protect your child and take their pain away. No matter what the reason they are doing what they are doing, watching this would be soul crushing as a mother.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Yes, I agree with you, I can't think of anything that would be more devastating than to watch your Child die such a brutal death.

    Happy Easter and stay safe from the virus...Bill
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"Mary Wept" is a sad and heartfelt poem that gives us a glimpse from a mother and son. An awful thing they endured. Very sad and creative.

Blessings and Happy Easter Bill and stay well.
Janet


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Hello Janet,

    Thank you, my friend, for your wonderful review, I appreciate it. Yes, I agree with you, what a horrible thing for Mary to witness. Especially, knowing that she had been chosen by God Almighty to be the Mother of our Savior and then watch Him die such a brutal death hanging on that old rugged cross.

    Happy Easter to you and your family...Please stay safe from the virus...Bill
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"Mary Wept", is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This poet's talent and faith shone through in this excellent poem. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Hello Duchess,

    Thank you my friend for your wonderful review and rating, I appreciate it very much.

    Take care of yourself and Happy Easter...Stay safe...Bill

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 11-Apr-2020

    Hello Bill,'You certainly deserved them
    Hopefully we'll both have a Happy Easter and Stay safe,
    the Duchess
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Hello Cedar,
MARVELOUS piece of poetry having impressive as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Contest Winner!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
[ You've already reached far above all the desired STARS.]


 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Hello RP,

    Thank you for your wonderful review, I appreciate it very much.

    Happy Easter my friend...Stay safe from the virus...Bill

reply by RPSaxena on 11-Apr-2020
    Bill, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is beautiful brother, absolutely beautiful. I love the powerful message conveyed in it. Congratulations! You nailed it literally and deserve all of the accolades that this has generated. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done, keep the faith flag flying, and, Bless you!


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Thank you brother for your very kind words, I appreciate it. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

    Happy Easter to you and your family...Stay safe from the virus...Bill
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Hi Bill, Congratulations on your Easter Acrostic win! A wonderful poem, I haven't got any 6's left, but I'm sure you don't need any more as you won a prize! :) Happy Easter and stay well! :)


 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
    Hello Susan,

    Thank you, my friend, for your very nice review and your offer of a six. All I really care about is that you enjoyed it, that makes it all worth while. Happy Easter and stay safe...Bill
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