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Engraved in Stone


The passion of love expressed in words.

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Lylise
 
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This is a solid entry into you Use These Words Poetry Prompt. It is cleverly written and this structure is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 04-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comments, but I would create a more sensible poem next time.

reply by Lylise on 10-Apr-2015
    What do you mean?
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RYME4U
 
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This free verse is well constructed and has some well chosen
words. The description of Love carved in stone is done well throughout the poem. Good job!


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your review.
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ElPoetry001
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Only the most emotional and motivated, under the influence of pheromones, will proclaim his love by writing in stone, or on a tree. Politicians will advise you only to say it, so that you can "walk it back," if someone with any standing protests; a would be suitor from 6th grade.

Nevertheless, writing in stone, or wood, often provides immediate results, thereby avoiding the long courtship.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comment here.
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Pyrrho
 
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I probably should not have read this one because the motivation is so artificial and ... un-endearing.

It just does not read like poetry, however, I do admit that you managed to make it seem more poetic than ordinary prose, and you did string the required words together without too much artificiality.


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comment.
    Probably these set up peotyr competitions are not
    how the great poets did their stuff.
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thomdble
 
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The picture and the artwork behind the words give the illusion of either being written in stone or carved into a tree. The writer met the challenge and created something quite romantically beautiful also. I give credit and kudos to this artist who made this work so well and my thanks


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comments.
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