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The Serpent and the Jolly Bride.

RADIO: Pantomime planning meeting.

  3 total reviews 
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ElPoetry001
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Current, real time, applicable dialogue, always play to adults, at the sixth grade level, no sub Rosa themes, metaphors, or word choice that would befuddle the customer that is now focused on the coffee, ice cream and cake that is to follow the play.

Also, the fart guy never gives a preview, it is always the silent invader when dialogue is most critical, and it never occurs during a fainting or dying scene; however it can clear the stage.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Great fun! May try to write a panto sometime!
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Eric1
 
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Hi Richard, the problems of amateur dramatics Eh? Comical look at the local theatre groups making massive decisions reads well my friend.


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comments.

reply by Eric1 on 04-Apr-2015
    You are welcome my friend
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Michael Ludwinder II
 
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What is important for scripts, at least for me, is that I be able to follow the story using the dialogue. And I could to that here. The dialogue was excellent. This was easy to read, an enjoyable story line, and a great read. Well done!


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comments.
    We can have a laugh at the planning meeting
    to set the stage for the panto!
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