Write a Kyrielle A kyrielle is made of quatrains (four lines) that rhyme (any rhyme scheme can be used). Each stanza (quatrain) has a line that repeats from the previous stanza. That line is usually the last line in the stanza, but it does not have to be. Each line is made up of eight syllables. There is no limit to the number of stanzas. A Kyrielle is usually made up of three or more stanzas. For this prompt, a minimum of three stanzas is required.
Hah! What a zippity do da poem. Loved every line of it. I thought the little one would never get away, and then the funniest ending! Left me with a big old smile. Thanks for making my day. Wish I had a six left, this deserves one.
This is excellent. You tell a story here and, of course, it can be read on many levels. I like the part where you count out the time. A well written and enjoyable poem.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
Thanks for your comment. After writing it and postint it, I thought of the Jacob wrestling with God bible story.