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The Octopus Poem


Childrens fantasy poem.

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TOMORAL
 
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Hah! What a zippity do da poem. Loved every line of it. I thought the little one would never get away, and then the funniest ending! Left me with a big old smile. Thanks for making my day. Wish I had a six left, this deserves one.


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comment. It's great to laugh.
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Michael Ludwinder
 
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This is excellent. You tell a story here and, of course, it can be read on many levels. I like the part where you count out the time. A well written and enjoyable poem.


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comment. After writing it and postint it, I thought of the Jacob wrestling with God bible story.
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