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Renault 4 Repair


Sorry. This might be your old banger. Humor.

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Nosha17
 
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That must have been very frustrating having to deal with all those things going wrong. We used to have old cars and we spent more than if we had bought a newer one. Good touch of humour, well narrated and interesting story line. I spotted two errors, hope you don't mind: Para 16, this sounds better: Because of the consistent failures/shortcomings of this car.......... Para 28, faint. Enjoyable read. Faye


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Thanks for your comment.
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kiwijenny
 
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buy a non French car ...just saying..what if it's a plot to get rid of English speakers...I know said the French inventer i will design a car to make English people go mad...and here it is...brake pad by brake pad
God bless


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Thanks for your reply.
    Everything that's been invented can go wrong.
    Even some new release films turn into turkeys.
    By Christmas they have been sliced up and forgotten.
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risktaker
 
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I like the dialogue and the sequence of events. I like the flow, tone, and scenes depicted. I feel the desire and determination to fix the car so that it can be driven and enjoyed. I also feel the age and demise of the old worn out gears, and metal components that are hard to obtain. Entertaining.


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Thanks for your comment.

reply by risktaker on 11-May-2015
    ok

reply by risktaker on 11-May-2015
    ok
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