Romance Poetry and love have been synonymous since poetry was first invented. Your acrostic poem should relate to this subject. An acrostic is a poem which spells out a word or idea. Sometimes what it spells out is the the title of the poem itself. Usually the first letter of each line spells out this key word.
That must have been very frustrating having to deal with all those things going wrong. We used to have old cars and we spent more than if we had bought a newer one. Good touch of humour, well narrated and interesting story line. I spotted two errors, hope you don't mind: Para 16, this sounds better: Because of the consistent failures/shortcomings of this car.......... Para 28, faint. Enjoyable read. Faye
buy a non French car ...just saying..what if it's a plot to get rid of English speakers...I know said the French inventer i will design a car to make English people go mad...and here it is...brake pad by brake pad
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
Thanks for your reply.
Everything that's been invented can go wrong.
Even some new release films turn into turkeys.
By Christmas they have been sliced up and forgotten.
I like the dialogue and the sequence of events. I like the flow, tone, and scenes depicted. I feel the desire and determination to fix the car so that it can be driven and enjoyed. I also feel the age and demise of the old worn out gears, and metal components that are hard to obtain. Entertaining.