This is a very entertaining account of your excitement, as the race nears. Readers are treated to a number of the sounds and smells of nature you have noted through your window. I believe 'leviathan' needs an s at the end. Good work.
I want to know what I am reviewing from the author notes...I am tired and eyes are strained..just tell me what synaerhesia is it sounds painful from a hypedermic needle...I like your attention to nature ..your observation of the simplicity of a robins life...a month to make the next generation...awesome