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A synaesthetic poem about Spring.

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vapros
 
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This is a very entertaining account of your excitement, as the race nears. Readers are treated to a number of the sounds and smells of nature you have noted through your window. I believe 'leviathan' needs an s at the end. Good work.

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Thanks for your comment.
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kiwijenny
 
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I want to know what I am reviewing from the author notes...I am tired and eyes are strained..just tell me what synaerhesia is it sounds painful from a hypedermic needle...I like your attention to nature ..your observation of the simplicity of a robins life...a month to make the next generation...awesome
God bless


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Thanks for your comment.
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