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Anaesthesia style poem about Spring

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giraffmang
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Hi there,

This was quite an enjoyable poem to read although I was a bit confused as initially it seemed he was falling face down (dandelions in mouth etc) and following this appears to be on back (hand on chest, clouds above).

The amalgamation of words made it a little difficult to read as well.

Garlick is also spelt garlic.


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your comment. It's written by someone only 10-11% conscious that's why its hard.
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Richard after reading both I am leaning to the other one. I find the other one to have a bit more connection and to me make a bit more sense. I s the poem meant to make semi-sense? Patricia


 Comment Written 18-Apr-2015



reply by the author on 11-May-2015
    Semi-sense, yes. I was hit over the back of the head so my thinking is not straight.
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