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wash your hands, please (a contest entry)

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padumachitta
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Hi
This made me laugh, it is true. I watched a little girl play with a frog and the resulting mess...the frog jumped away and the dirt stayed with the firl..

good luck in the contest
padumachitta


 Comment Written 07-May-2015



reply by the author on 07-May-2015
    Hi! So good to see you! Thank you for your heart-warming review - I'm SO pleased you liked this little poem, and I enjoyed your small story!
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I love your haiku!!!

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-right amount of syllables used
-a satori line
-excellent art work- very cute picture
-short-long-short format
-no rhyming




 Comment Written 07-May-2015


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Terrific work with this one. You actually got a giggle out of me. This is perfect in every way. Love the last line, definitely an ah-hah moment. Clever illustration too. I wish I had a 6 to give you for this one.


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Ha-ha, yeah, they certainly are, Dawn. I used to fill my diapers (cloth at that time, not the disposable jobs) with anything I could get my grubby little hands on, my mom once told me. She was mortally terrified of insects, so changing my soiled diapers was doubly dangerous, if you get what I'm sayin'. She said it was nothing to see spiders, beetles, and yeah, even a lizard once, come rolling out of my diaper, along with other things I won't mention here.

Okay, I think I've managed to make you squeamish enough. At least I hope so, heh-heh.

Good luck in the contest, Dawn...~Dean ;)


 Comment Written 07-May-2015


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: Its a fiver from me, for a nice little 5-7-5. Would have made great ad copy along the lines of Britain's Pears Soap of 60 years ago - you know the old adage about kids and animals (or mud)

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 Comment Written 07-May-2015



reply by the author on 07-May-2015
    Funny you should mention ad copy - I've written a fair bit of it. (LOL) My second stint at college was for Advertising, and I handled quite a large ad campaign for a local charity following it.

    Thank you for a wonderful review - much appreciated!
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Hi, Dawn...

Indeed....lots of soap for curious little hands. Love the artwork you chose. Perfect complement for your poem. It's a great entry.

Good luck

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

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