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The Flying Typewriter

An ordinary day is shattered.

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Very nice Free Verse poem; nice word choice and descriptive writing. Very well written and thought out. Nice art work for this writing. Great job.

Comment Written 11-May-2015

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this is really a wierd poem that I had to read a couple times. Thankfully you put down a comment to inform the reader. First we are looking at copiers, then a bomb, then an old typewriter flies through the air. Provocative finale with words being lost int he chaos and confusion. Bombs and the man in the gray flannel (blue) suit. Guess you were just having fun with this one. It is inventive

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