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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Faery Mother"

Writing for Brooke

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Pearl Edwards
 
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A nice poem and a plea for Brooke to get well soon. Lovely artwork and the fairies and the butterfly, things she writes of so well. Friend, teacher and lover of words, and hopefully soon she will be able to get back to her words. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 17-Jun-2015



reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015
    Thank you Pearl. We all miss her so much and pray for God's grace. Bless you for reading. Kay XX
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Hi Kay, just wrote her a poem...this is just beautiful...I love the wording...and the picture is stunning...so very nicely written...I think I am still in shock...I hope she is home soon...God Bless sweet lady..that be you...Love ya Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 30-May-2015



reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
    Just read your poem. We'll have to stop meeting like this. People will start talking...Ha, Ha. Love ya too. :-)xx

reply by l.raven on 03-Jun-2015
    well I thank you so very much sweet girl...nothing like a little gossip...LOL...love ya...xxoo
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A short and lovely poem for Brooke. Three lovely faery verses acknowledging Miranda's role in caring for Brooke as she is doing and wishing Brooke's early return home - to 'fly free' - lovely alliteration to end your poem. Warm regards Dorothy x


 Comment Written 30-May-2015



reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Thank you Dorothy. Miranda is mad about faeries. Bless you, Kay.
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G'day Kay, this is a wonderful piece mate and I'm sure Brooke will love it as much as I did. It is a great tribute to the great lady that is our Brooke, well done and cheers Fez.


 Comment Written 30-May-2015



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    Thanks Fez. Her daughter loves faeries. Bless you my friend. Kay XX
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Get well Booke is the shout out to all that know her so well she is a very special person indeed and we all love and care for her so much she has been such a guiding light to so many


 Comment Written 30-May-2015



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    Hello Barbara, long time no see? Thanks for reading my friend. Love, Kay.

reply by country ranch writer on 07-Jun-2015
    hi I m in and out for now so be prepared for me to pop up now and again
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Dearest Kace,

Again a beautiful and touching tribute to this wonderful woman and poet. Just as she is for all here on Fanstory, always keep in mind you are too.

I love this simple and incredible dedication to our friend and mentor.

your friend always.. Jimi


 Comment Written 29-May-2015



reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Jimi, Thanks so much for reading. I sent you an Ecard a while back? You haven't read it. Love, Kay XX
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Love your words and the image of the fairy mother. My love takes wings is a wonderful line that is light and full of good feelings. Hopefully, Brooke will be well and back soon.


 Comment Written 29-May-2015



reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you. Love, Kay.
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'My thoughts are for you
My love takes wings
Faery wings to hold you
Bring you home well...'

I add my thoughts to yours, Kay. This poem is a lovely gesture of support and affection.

:) Bev


 Comment Written 29-May-2015



reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you Bev. Love, Kay.

reply by Writingfundimension on 29-May-2015
    You're very welcome, Kay. XX Bev
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I enjoyed your fairy picture and theme. Love the idea of a stained glass wing. I know Miranda will take good care of her mom. She is a friend and teacher to us all. When I think of my first poetry attempts, shudder at the thought. I have a long way to go, but Brooke inspired me and always will. Nice poem. I like it a lot :)


 Comment Written 29-May-2015



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    Thank you Joy. Blessings, Kay.
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Hello, Aussie. What a lovely tribute to our dear Brooke. She is being inundated with well wishes and I do so hope she comes back to us. :>D Miss Sally


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reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thanks so much, Miss Sally. Blessings, Kay.
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