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Get Well, Brooke!


Writing for Brooke

  24 total reviews 
Comment by
Liberty Justice
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Rating of Prologue -
Ten Tiny Dandelion Seeds
So darling. Perfect as a nursery rhyme for children or adults. Animated flower blowing in the wind and vivid descriptive alliterations paint snappy bouncy adventures of this dandelion.liberty justice


 Comment Written 14-Dec-2015



reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    Thank you for digging this one up out of the discard heap and offering your opinions on it, LJ. This was written for a dear long-time member here who has been sick as of late in the hopes of cheering her up. Brooke Baldwin (adewpearl) taught many poetry classes here and was the number one ranked poet for many years in a row. Her light hearted spirit and wonderful poems touched everyone that knew her, and she is still sorely missed.
    I very much appreciate your kind review.
    ~Dean
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Harold Clapsaddle
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
A Prayer for a Friend
What a beautiful prayer. I like how you praised God within the prayer. Blessings be of many rewards that grows on ones heart. Well done. :-))


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    Hello Harold. WOW! I thank you so very much for this amazing review. Loyd

reply by Harold Clapsaddle on 17-Nov-2015
    It was defiantly my pleasure meeting another Christian. :-))
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Benjamin Valencia
 
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Rating of Chapter 10008 -
Bless You Brooke
Hi Fez..Ben here..I hope you don't mind that I was going through your portfolio. I enjoyed this tribute to Brooke also known as Gungalo correct? She gave me feedback and was pretty witty in her feedback exchanges. I left Fanstory for a while and upon my return, I was in shock that something dreaded happened. Life on Fanstory hasn't been the same without her. You express that well in your dedication. Cheers.


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 29-Aug-2015
    Thanks Ben. No probs mate. No Gungalo and Brooke are 2 different people. Poor Gungalo died a couple of years ago and poor Brooke has been sick for a few months now. Both are good friends of mine and I miss them. Brooke was number one (and still is in my opinion)on this site for many years. I don't deserve the #1, Brooke does and when she is well and can post again she will have it back. I'm only keeping it warm for her and I don't want to be number one. Cheers Fez

reply by Benjamin Valencia on 30-Aug-2015
    Hi Fez...thanks for your counter-reply. Wish I knew how Gungalo met her fate. She was unique and she sounded so young in her writes. She deserved the best. Cheers.
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Jean Lutz
 
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ONLY A BOY (she said) Adewpearl
May this be a lullaby to bring comfort for Brooke who has penned so many lullabies for others. Congratulation on the well deserved win!


 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015



reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
    Tank you, dear Jean. So happy you could resonate with this. We are hoping for Brooke. Thank you for the support of this write.
    My best wishes,
    RGstar
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TPAC
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
A Brooklet's Dream
I found this write exciting bursting with delights for the reader to absorb, writer firm control makes this work appeal, writer seemingly effortless aims become solid thoughts -I found to be a good read


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
    Hi Tpac,
    thanks for dropping by with your very kind review, stars and comments... most appreciated!

    with our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James.
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I am Cat
 
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
A Brooklet's Dream
James,
I've not ever seen your poetry so smoothy written, so lyrical in quality and so wonderfully lilting... I absolutely love this piece and am so saddened that I gave my last six earlier today...
But you have to know how lovely this is.
and I know how special it must be to Brooke as well.

It's so masterfully done.
I absolutely love the way your words move together here...
You need to write just like this... all the time... it soothes the savage beast...
it heals wounds, it bathes the heart in a glow.
I absolutely loved it.

'A stream turns to river; a river to the sea,

Yet a single drop of water can sprout and grow a tree.

For the mission of our brooklet in her calm and measured course,

Is to feed--protect and nurture every droplet from its source. '

wow... just so beautifully said... it's a flowing message of healing love.

With our words,
we heal wounds...
and wipe away a river of anguish. ;)

lovely... absolutely breathtaking.
Cat **********'s perfection


 Comment Written 27-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
    Hi Cat,
    how kind of you to say and express such wonderful feelings... thing is, I never know what I'm about to write, I write what's in my heart at the time... maybe dark, maybe light, and sometimes even inspiring and to tell you the truth, I love it that way. I stay away from a 'pigeon-hole' trade mark... that's what I love about your art... just never know what you're going to get, but what I do know, it's always going to be exceptional.

    So thank you my dear sweet friend for such a truly exceptional review... stars and accolades mean nothing without the truth of intent... and this is what has made this review so special... greatly appreciated!

    With our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James vx's
Comment by
poetadeu
 
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Rating of Chapter 10003 -
Of Dandelions and Fairies
Your sonnet is impeccable and with subject we
can share with you. It is as eloquent as it's
star and I hope her shinning light comes on
again...I join Ray in wishing you back very soon.


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
    Thanks so much for this excellent review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my sonnet for Brooke.
    Ray

reply by poetadeu on 27-Jul-2015
    Always my pleasure. LOL::}Joyce
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l.raven
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Rating of Prologue -
ONLY A BOY (she said) Adewpearl
HI Roy, I don't know how I missed this...it is just beautiful...Brooke is truly a very special lady...and she is so right about you voice...a brilliant poem...and a priceless picture...so sorry I have no sixes...Luff Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 24-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
    Thank you, so much. I am coming back slowly with my writing. Keeping fingers crossed for Brooke.
    My best wishes.
    RG

reply by l.raven on 27-Jul-2015
    Hi Roy, she is finally heading to Miranda's...I know she will be so happy...they are a loving family...you are sooooo welcome...Luff Linda xxoo
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rama devi
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A Spoonful of Medicine
Nice post for Brooke in tribute to Sawyers influence on her writing. I was not active here when this book came out, but as I visit portfolios of friends like you, I am finding such nice poems for Brooke. I'm sure she loved them all!

Hugs, rd


 Comment Written 24-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
    Thank you so much. It looks like dear Brooke is improving thanks to the loving care of her daughter.

reply by rama devi on 24-Jul-2015
    That's great news! :) Thanks, dear.
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RGstar
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Rating of Chapter 10001 -
A Brooklet's Dream
Lovely, my brother. I must have missed this one with being away. Lovely serene write. Exquisite poetic aura surrounds.
Wishing you well in the competition.
Best wishes,
RG


 Comment Written 24-Jul-2015



reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
    Hi Roy,
    thank you my Brother, I know you have a life outside Fanstory, so I don't expect you to catch everything of my in betweens.
    Also a big thank you for your well wishes... you know that is returned in kind for your extraordinary brilliant entry... really, I am already a winner to be nominated... be well my friend, and may you be setting your dreams alight.

    With our thoughts we create,
    the energetic power of healing,
    James.
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